Dreams are like soft droplets of dew Always misting through our mind Yearning for hopes and wishes anew
Dreams are endless on repetitive rewind Reaching heart strings in perfect time Each one precious and full of new hope Accounting for immeasurable pleasure Making us malleable and able to cope Stored deep within as hidden treasure
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Thank you Odette Spirit Sister for your beautiful example! This one is for my daughter in Mexico!
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 4, 2014
I love this!!!!! So true about daydreams
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 4, 2014
Dreams are like soft droplets of dew Always misting through our mind Yearning for hopes and wishes anew
Dreams are endless on repetitive rewind Reaching heart strings in perfect time Each one precious and full of new hope Accounting for immeasurable pleasure Making us malleable and able to cope Stored deep within as hidden treasure
Awesomely beautiful Jade, I love it. I'm sure your daughter will too.
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 4, 2014
B E A U T I F U L Jade!
I could comment on every line of this(but then of course, you'd have a copy of your poem in your comments )
Suffice it to say, I loved every exquisitely-penned line!
Cat(a tonic)...
is the pic above. Love it So out-there & in-your-face (but I still have hopes your dream will be your life one day! )
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 4, 2014
Hi Jade
A super acrostic beautifully presented - Great rhyming too, a really enjoyable read.
Comments (5)
Always misting through our mind
Yearning for hopes and wishes anew
Dreams are endless on repetitive rewind
Reaching heart strings in perfect time
Each one precious and full of new hope
Accounting for immeasurable pleasure
Making us malleable and able to cope
Stored deep within as hidden treasure
Awesomely beautiful Jade, I love it. I'm sure your daughter will too.
I could comment on every line of this(but then of course, you'd have a copy of your poem in your comments )
Suffice it to say, I loved every exquisitely-penned line!
Cat(a tonic)...
is the pic above. Love it So out-there & in-your-face (but I still have hopes your dream will be your life one day! )
A super acrostic beautifully presented - Great rhyming too, a really enjoyable read.
Regards
Bill