Hi Happy, I think the best word to describe your Sonnet is "bittersweet". The caption at the end describes it perfectly. A beautiful poem of reminisc.
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USASep 6, 2014
What a wonderful Poem!
beautifulyouNew York, USASep 6, 2014
Hi Happy,
love the name of your write and especially this
'Reaching out to touch you but you are gone
Flowers essence that seems to linger on
Rain drops wash away all my cares today
As I trace the lines, the etching of life'
Quite moving
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 6, 2014
Rock on, Happy!!!
This is beautiful... the memories, everything you wrote here, I love it all!
Rock on, rock on!!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 6, 2014
Hi Sherri
Your poem, despite its poignancy, is most beautifully penned: Life may take our youth, but it can never take our memories (so long as our mental health is intact) - alas, that is not necessarily a plus - at least, not in every case.
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I think the best word to describe
your Sonnet is "bittersweet".
The caption at the end
describes it perfectly.
A beautiful poem of reminisc.
love the name of your write and especially this
'Reaching out to touch you but you are gone
Flowers essence that seems to linger on
Rain drops wash away all my cares today
As I trace the lines, the etching of life'
Quite moving
This is beautiful... the memories, everything you wrote here, I love it all!
Rock on, rock on!!
Your poem, despite its poignancy, is most beautifully penned: Life may take our youth, but it can never take our memories (so long as our mental health is intact) - alas, that is not necessarily a plus - at least, not in every case.
Kindest regards
Bill