hip hip..............

if you were here i'd share with you all that you have missed
your ears would be my sounding board of things i couldn't resist
i'd go way back when we were young and laughter filled the air
and slowly bring you through the years no moment would i spare
things that happened in my life that bought me so much joy
all the decisions that i've made turning into man from a boy
i'd go into minute detail of every amazing place i've seen
paint those pictures in your head so you may go an dream
i'd bring you up to date on all those new fangled things
and show you how to use them and the fun that it brings
i'd check on every word so you would never misunderstand
and make sure that you accepted this was not by demand
but just the normal way to share with you as if to celebrate
many a lost birthday wish on the journey of your fate.......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
SAP.........My beautiful sister would have been 55 today.....I'll just put this out in cosmos so she can pick up what i am putting down......

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Girlygirl196349
This is so lovely hug hug I'm sorry for your loss angel angel hug hug
Nuwahri61
Hi Girlygirl........Thanks ....it happened a very long time ago but it's always good to reflect........appreciate your thoughts ...regards Nugrin
SCatlyn
Aww... this is a wonderful, delightful poem! So sorry on the loss of your sister - wow, I'm 51 myself - kinda makes a person think.

professor Now, I do have a question - when I first saw the title, I thought it might be referring to a broken hip(cuz us folks have to watch out for that kinda thing) or I thought maybe it was for Hip Hip Hooray...
Now I realize it was not the 1st one.... but not sure if I got it on the 2nd one... just curious!

To your poem and your wonderful sister wine rose

Cat
Nuwahri61
Hi Cat ...thanks for your kind thoughts....yes you got it the second time ......its usually something you say when you celebrate so it just came to me as a title .........Regards Nugrin
morgen90210
thanks for sharing mate...blessed her soul.... n worth my time reading n feelingbit
trurorob
Yeah agree best to celebrate her life rather than death, loving write.
Rob
trurorob
Yeah agree best to celebrate her life rather than death, loving write.
Rob
Nuwahri61
Hey Morgen ........Good to hear from you ......Thanks for your input....hope all is well mate ...Regards Nucheers
Nuwahri61
Thanks Rob ........Appreciate your thoughts mate ....Regards Nuthumbs up
orientalkoru
I'm sure you would Nu...I feel the love and connection you had with your sister...very rare and very precious my dear!teddybear hug heart wings
Nuwahri61
Thanks Mrs Oriental...........i did have a great connection with her ......Regards Nuteddybear
Poetnumber1
Im sorry for your loss Nu. Very heartfelt mate. Loved it and do keep well.

cheers
Nuwahri61
Hey Poet ......Thanks for your thoughts mate...much appreciated ....Regards Nu cheers
gnj4u
Hi, Nuwahri61,
...just the normal way to share with you as if to celebrate many a lost birthday wish on the journey of your fate....... There is much love expressed in these cosmogyral lines of poetry from the heart. Though such a great loss was experienced and continues to be felt, what beautiful energy to release into the universe. Thanks for sharing. hip hip..............
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