Writing this from the deepest part of me she who sits on the golden sands Here I am love at your feet Dripping inside blood of passion sings in your desire Truly good morning precious smiles A loving clear bright blue sky
Heaven's loving Songbirds are singing I surrender my soul o beautiful rose sweetly in thorns yearning Autumn leaves beginning to lose their shades of green hue The heather is still in beautiful blossom A vision way outside this mind
Takes this soul away enchanting magical dreams inside out soft echoes, silently whisper Caressing blades of grass dew upon these fingertips Wet from tears running down these eyes as I rubbed the dew in deep thought Last night I was staring upon a full moon face Lunar vision inside the mind is now where one begins painting
A sun with her fingers has brought it all back to me Warmth from her sweet kiss burns deep inside gentle soft fingers of love's beauty warmly touching Love you give me all my reasons to live the very same reasons I would die for
Alone you're my every breathing thought Last night I was wishing for you searching space among'st the stars brightly such a vision shines all treasures wrapped up in one most amazing gift Finding you.re the answer to every dream prayers wishing with the lost souls staring crying your name into space Joining souls together, two hearts become one I found that paradise with you was lost
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaSep 9, 2014
"Love you give me all reasons to live the very same reasons I would die for"
Love can make you laugh; love can make you cry and is all worth while expereince where creation comes from and the one who wants to keep the walls around heart to keep sadness out also keeps out the joy so I found your loving nature as beautiful gift to tresure...to remind me that some men can be as romantic as women are Thank you for sharing
beautifulyouNew York, USASep 9, 2014
'I surrender my soul o beautiful rose sweetly in thorns yearning Autumn leaves beginning to loose their shades of green hue..'
spoken so beautifully dark,
if nature doesn't show us how to surrender, allowing for change, for life, to move through us, i don't know what does
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USASep 9, 2014
Lovely PEM much appiness is sent yor way
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USASep 9, 2014
Liam, you are such a romantic devil.....these poems are gonna be like an intoxicating love potion when she finally gets to read them.... God bless you....
Comments (24)
Ken
the very same reasons I would die for"
Love can make you laugh; love can make you cry and is all worth while expereince where creation comes from and the one who wants to keep the walls around heart to keep sadness out also keeps out the joy so I found your loving nature as beautiful gift to tresure...to remind me that some men can be as romantic as women are Thank you for sharing
sweetly in thorns yearning
Autumn leaves beginning to loose
their shades of green hue..'
spoken so beautifully dark,
if nature doesn't show us how to surrender, allowing for change, for life, to move through us, i don't know what does
Straight from the soul,
Best wishes.......
Very romantic, in fact, passionate write!
Kudos
Bill
God bless you....
Jade
Amy- Ravengypsy
Last night I was wishing for you
BRAVO! BRAVO! Dear Liam, this is passionate poetry at it's best, riven from deep within your soul.
"A vision way outside this mind"
How I love that!
..waking up the senses,feeling the sun, smelling the greenness of life....
does its job here...........
Thank you for taking me with you,
Avias
Kathy