Poem on Soul Palomas Challenge

by orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland, Australia

Sep 2014 867 Views 18 comments

Poem on the Soul (Paloma's Challenge)

Author: orientalkoru

To all of you who took the time to read and leave a comment..thank you so very much!

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Posted: Sep 2014

About this poem:

Paloma I hope this is acceptable and it's not too late...thanks for your challenge... it's always good to stretch the mind...

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Comments (18)

candykidAshburn, Virginia USASep 11, 2014

It is my pleasure to be the first to comment on this one. A really good entry....

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 11, 2014

I knew you would post a stunning write wonderful entry not too late the soul is on a never-ending seeking till it reaches its haven of peace.

Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland AustraliaSep 12, 2014

Awesome babe ....still trying to figure out the first word ......hmmm this is what you do when I'm at work he he ........Love Nu

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USASep 12, 2014

Hi, orientalkoru,
...re-living my days etched on crinkled face a beaming smile... Although the poem begins unsure of my destination it certainly knows how to end with a life well-lived! Thanks for sharing.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 12, 2014

It is always a pleasure to read good poetry, no matter how late.

I will not tire
re-living my days
etched on crinkled
face a beaming smile
remisniscence of a
life well-lived!

I love these lines.

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandSep 12, 2014

Beautiful entry to a
Great challenge Kathy,
I love the graphic also.

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 13, 2014

Hi CK.. Thanks mate for dropping in and your nice comment... Much appreciated...

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaSep 13, 2014

Graphic is extraordinary beautiful -magical -as well poetry too

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 14, 2014

Thank you Paloma for shaking up the corner in such a lively way;-). I had a look a few days ago... I never attempted it because I thought I needed to think and re arrange my thoughts because of the not so common words but once the line of thought was created ... it just came ... I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks again

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 14, 2014

Thank you love.. a great pleasure to have you on my comment thread... Hhhmmm... Yeah sure... This is what I do when you're at work and I'm not at work ;-D.

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 14, 2014

Hi Joy

Now that you mentioned it... I might have written this as per how I treat or see life... I've been known to jump into unknown situations where others would plan or research first. I learn as I go along... I think it is due to my belief that time is precious... Better to act than sit on a fence

Thanks Joy!

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandSep 14, 2014

Hi Orient

Stunning poem... Awesome picture

Loved reading your wonderful thoughts...thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 15, 2014

Now that is truly awesome, OrientalK!! Just beautiful(and those were my thoughts before I reached the picture).

I love this poem!!! Out of this world, as the saying goes