Soul .....Paloma....

Gossamer thoughts unravel
Reverent understanding of you
Nacreous in your spirit
In your Ataraxia too
Cosmogyral in your pursuit
Psyturism whispers to me
Aeolian in my Reminiscence
Your destination to be free..........
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Well just thought i would give this a crack .........

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paloma66
Nu your short poem conveyed all it was meant to do brilliantly.I'm glad you tried it,it has beautiful words to write on how many visions,how each one thinks differently that is the beauty of it.Thank you Nu for participating.applause cheering purple heart
orientalkoru
I think it's quite clever to be able to weave all these complex words together with just a few lines and come out with a moving, inspiring write... teddybear dancing blushing heart wings and yes I do love flowers bouquet bouquet rose daisy rose in teeth angel2 dance

If I didn't know this was a challenge... I'd be tempted to think you might have written this with me in mind... He he he... just because you often tell me I dream too much... In an almost Cosmogyral kind of way rolling on the floor laughing now 8 understand why this word got stuck in my head he he he... but I always say that's what dreaming is there for...... so we can dream of the impossible dream because obviously we don't dream of what's possible .. We just go do it instead...yeh yeh? dancing applause help angel hug teddybear
123whisper
Interesting play with wording wine Lovelyteddybear
Nuwahri61
Thanks Paloma .......my english has expanded after this one ....he he ...Regards Nugrin
gnj4u
Hi, Nuwahri61,
...our destination to be free.......... Conveys its message, short and to-the-point. Well done! Thanks for sharing.
Nuwahri61
Well you are just bias babe .........flowers did you say hmmmm.....i will see what i can grow he he ........bouquet Thanks dear...love Nu
trurorob
Nicely done take Nu.
Rob
Nuwahri61
Thanks Whisper .......appreciate your comments ....Regards Nugrin
Nuwahri61
Thanks Joy...This was a toughy..........Regards Nugrin
Nuwahri61
Thanks Rob ....This really had me thinking and using the dictionary ....Regards Nu
morgen90210
golly Nu...now I have to try this ...just a little bit...
it sure looks easy ..the way u put it
but I'll need a miracle to pull this through...nice one
Nuwahri61
Hi Morgen........I'm not sure how I did it either bro...he he but i reckon you will do just fine .........Thanks mate .....Regards Nuhandshake
Mizzy4online today!
You made this look easy Nu,
Fine entry for Paloma......
Mick.

beer
Nuwahri61
I wish i could say it was Mick....he he.....Thanks mate appreciate your thoughts ....Regards Nu grin
lindsyjonesonline today!
This is a very profound way of writing it Nu.
Thanks.
Nuwahri61
Hi Miss Jones.......Thanks for your lovely comment......It is very much appreciated ........good to see you back putting pen to paper....regards Nugrin
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