Gossamer thoughts unravel Reverent understanding of you Nacreous in your spirit In your Ataraxia too Cosmogyral in your pursuit Psyturism whispers to me Aeolian in my Reminiscence Your destination to be free..........
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Well just thought i would give this a crack .........
Nu your short poem conveyed all it was meant to do brilliantly.I'm glad you tried it,it has beautiful words to write on how many visions,how each one thinks differently that is the beauty of it.Thank you Nu for participating.
I think it's quite clever to be able to weave all these complex words together with just a few lines and come out with a moving, inspiring write... and yes I do love flowers
If I didn't know this was a challenge... I'd be tempted to think you might have written this with me in mind... He he he... just because you often tell me I dream too much... In an almost Cosmogyral kind of way now 8 understand why this word got stuck in my head he he he... but I always say that's what dreaming is there for...... so we can dream of the impossible dream because obviously we don't dream of what's possible .. We just go do it instead...yeh yeh?
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaSep 13, 2014
Thanks Rob ....This really had me thinking and using the dictionary ....Regards Nu
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 13, 2014
golly Nu...now I have to try this ...just a little bit... it sure looks easy ..the way u put it but I'll need a miracle to pull this through...nice one
Comments (16)
If I didn't know this was a challenge... I'd be tempted to think you might have written this with me in mind... He he he... just because you often tell me I dream too much... In an almost Cosmogyral kind of way now 8 understand why this word got stuck in my head he he he... but I always say that's what dreaming is there for...... so we can dream of the impossible dream because obviously we don't dream of what's possible .. We just go do it instead...yeh yeh?
...our destination to be free.......... Conveys its message, short and to-the-point. Well done! Thanks for sharing.
Rob
it sure looks easy ..the way u put it
but I'll need a miracle to pull this through...nice one
Fine entry for Paloma......
Mick.
Thanks.