SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 23, 2014
Wayne, This is outstanding!!
I was surprised at first to see the red, but it's brilliant, as you so accurately describe the fires- I lived in Oklahoma for a lot of years - and it's come so close- I could smell it... and drove into the thick smoke of one once...
Beautiful, descriptive write!
Cat
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USASep 26, 2014
Powerful write Wayne. Cafe
niah9Auckland, New ZealandSep 27, 2014
a poem that flew down the list before I had chance to comment....as Café said, a powerful write.....Kathy
beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 2, 2014
no doubt, this write has some intense imagery and movement wayne; nice job
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This is outstanding!!
I was surprised at first to see the red, but it's brilliant, as you so accurately describe the fires- I lived in Oklahoma for a lot of years - and it's come so close- I could smell it... and drove into the thick smoke of one once...
Beautiful, descriptive write!
Cat
Cafe
imagery and movement wayne; nice job