5 7 5 Mol

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Oct 2014 918 Views 9 comments

5-7-5 Mol

Author: Unknown

Ned is dyslexic
I see god but he sees dog
I'm saved, he's bitten

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Posted: Oct 2014

About this poem:

I read there was a Haiku challenge, and as I couldn't sleep, I decided to do a silly haiku instead :-)

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Comments (9)

lindsyjones

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAOct 10, 2014

Molly so nice to see you here and this is so great. I've shied away because it's very difficult but this is awesome.

mollybaby

mollybabyOPCork City, Cork IrelandOct 10, 2014

Hi LJ, I am totally lacking in both style and confidence re.poetry too. However, it you are awake at 4am, it seems like a good idea to try it!

lindsyjones

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAOct 10, 2014

Molly one of the hardest challenge for me in writing is restrictions of which Haiku is famous for. I have had very few written long time ago and I have to say I struggled to make it work.
Our friend Angeline here has so many selections that are so beautifully written. I an enthralled with this one so keep writing them.

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 10, 2014

Hello Molly,
this is an absolute riot!

I can not stop laughing over here !!

this is the best haiku i've ever seen

niah9

niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 10, 2014

inspiration at 4am........nice one mollybaby

mollybaby

mollybabyOPCork City, Cork IrelandOct 12, 2014

Thanks Beautiful! Much appreciated

Yes Niah, maybe it is the best time?

Nuwahri61

Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland AustraliaOct 12, 2014

Yeah cool write Molly got me chuckling.........Regards Nu

mollybaby

mollybabyOPCork City, Cork IrelandOct 12, 2014

Thanks Nu!

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 13, 2014

hey there molly,

i shared this with family;
some of them think think you have a potentially lucrative career writing these things... i so agree

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