I miss you like a part of me That I never thought Id ever see I never knew or even cared I'd become numb and never dared Think there could ever, ever be Someone that enchanted me The way you did, or make me see There could be more to life than levity I'd become numb and walled my heart Not wanting it to be again split apart My pain was endless, but I bared it alone Got used to it as it seeped into every bone My mind could not ease out the pain You entered in like good morphaine My mind at ease and then in ecstasy As I hallucinated you being with me You were the drug...my drug of choice I loved your laugh and adored your voice your moral compass and tact I loved to chat...I respected all that I loved you then. I love you now The emptiness you created makes me vow To never let my guard down again I loved you and also was your good friend As time went on you would not even that allow My consciousness and abilities wained somehow My drug of choice you took away I can barely get threw the next day Your face and smile and laugh I miss I longed to hold you and then to kiss No thoughts of lust or greed or self I only wanted to make you happy and make you smile Perhaps to love and have you love me back for a while Really I wanted to grow old with you To make you smile and laugh til we both knew We were meant to be together for ever Grow old to the grave and forsake you never
The mix of dreams and reality highlight the love-tormented mind. The beginning, like a part of me / That I never thought Id ever see, intrigues me. It sounds as if the relationship resulted in self-discovery. Perhaps that alone, to become more, is worth the price paid. Thanks for sharing!
gnj4 thanks for your kind comment. We are all works in progress. Hey, you know poetry is a lot of embellishment. I see hope on the horizon. And "hope" is a knockout...lol.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 11, 2010
From the heart of pain comes forth love's sweet refrain(music).Bask in the sunshine of love.Wish you Happiness,boyshchrm,
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The mix of dreams and reality highlight the love-tormented mind. The beginning, like a part of me / That I never thought Id ever see, intrigues me. It sounds as if the relationship resulted in self-discovery. Perhaps that alone, to become more, is worth the price paid. Thanks for sharing!
Take Care
rob
I can feel your pain. I hope everything works out. Take care.
We are all works in progress. Hey,
you know poetry is a lot of embellishment.
I see hope on the horizon. And "hope"
is a knockout...lol.
A moving and well flowing poem.
the 6% beer...lol.
with you and glad you can write again.
and profusely. Ty