Weathered barn All idle and gray Through vacant doors Hollowed black Sills rotting with decay Another year stands By autumn woods As colors fade away Day by day One by one To all are gone Once long ago You were young New and green Like the trees Make fallen logs In late spring In a skidder hauled To the rushing saw At the watermill Down by the falls One by one Day by day Board by board The builders Made you strong
Hi, Yankee4you, Board by board The builders Made you strong... stands in bold opposition to …vacant doors Hollowed black Sills rotting with decay… I love that your write ends with the more positive image of a Weathered Barn. Thank you for sharing.
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAOct 14, 2014
we have a lot of old barns and buildings and in this poem you have described them perfictly
beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 15, 2014
yankee it's really good to see you and read from you thanks for posting this
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 15, 2014
Its nice to see you around Chris. A delightful piece, flows so smoothly.
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Board by board The builders Made you strong... stands in bold opposition to …vacant doors Hollowed black Sills rotting with decay… I love that your write ends with the more positive image of a Weathered Barn. Thank you for sharing.
it's really good to see you and read from you
thanks for posting this