I declare

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Oct 2014 751 Views 15 comments

I declare

Author: cafetwo2010

Let me embrace you in
Hunger pains
Unspoken pains of the
Soul
Let me taste the lips you've
Saved for me in fantasy's
Dreams behold
But before I drink the wine
Of your love and you milk
Me like the goddess of fire
I crown your head and kiss
Your feet and declare I could
Accend no higher.

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Posted: Oct 2014

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Comments (15)

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 15, 2014

this feels so sad cafe, yet it's so beautifully written and expressed,

thanks for this heartfelt write;
it's truly poignant

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaOct 15, 2014

A declaration of love any lady would dream about

, but not every maiden in a row has been lucky enough to experience

. Good luck, dear Knight, wish you were as happy as you would wish for yourself! Wish us, maidens, the same! Kindest regards from across the great pond!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2014

beautifulyou.. Thank you sweet. I'm not quite the train wreck my
poetry suggests but every now and then things peek through.

Cafe

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2014

marikia.. All the very best to you darling..and then some.
Cafe

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAOct 15, 2014

Jj2...the picture change has not changed your heart and mind! Pretty nice stuff here! I almost passed this up the title stopped me, I declare some days....

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAOct 15, 2014

Good courtly stuff bro!

Ken

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2014

imaginelove.. Thank you dear.. Titles can be so misleading. Good poem bad title. Bad poem good title.
Good poem good title. Bad poem bad title. Who's to know? We sense some need
in the words we see.
Cafe

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAOct 15, 2014

Pure Fire...

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2014

Ken.. I knew sooner or later I'd be hauled into court.
Cafe

Thank you bro..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2014

candykid.. Thanks much bro.. Keep the candle lit.
Cage

niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 15, 2014

I don't think you are a train wreck Café....and I think you could easily win any fair maiden over....by being you.....and the poem.....a very romantic outside the box write....Kathy

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2014

Niah.. Yes dear, but you gotta watch that railroad crossing. Thank you.
Cafe

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAOct 16, 2014

Hi, cafetwo2010,
and declare I could Accend no higher is such a high bar to set. I hope the ability to declare it so is enough, since assurance can never be obtained that any height (no matter how great) is the maximum. Thanks for sharing.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandOct 16, 2014

Hi Cafe

Hunger pains...now there's an embrace, where I come from anyway