My sorrow (5 7 5)

Petals of sorrow

dripping the moist of my tears

Silenced by the wind.
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
Just been thinking lately.

Thanks for all your reads and comments.

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Comments (14)

ImagineLove
Somber my friend! angel hug purple heart
mollybaby
Well done LJ, you nailed it!hug
socrates44online today!
Exquisite imagery in haiku format.
Well Written!
lindsyjones
Thanks Jade. I truly appreciate your comments. bouquet
lindsyjones
Molly thanks
lindsyjones
Socrates how so nice of you.

Thanks.
Spartacus2012
Nice confessional sister Phyllis!

Kenflower
lindsyjones
Thanks my brother Ken.
BBMis4me
Hi my dear friend :)

I liked very much... purple heart

Stellhug
lindsyjones
Stel, how are you. Nice to see you back my beautiful friend. bouquet hug
Happygolucky4u
I so love a good haiku and I love yours. Nicely done!rose
beautifulyou
hi phyllis,
in keeping, i ran across these two images and was
moved to share them with you...

The petals seem to be cradling many tears,
as if honouring them,

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...while surrounding flower buds are present to
fully support any and all moments of the experience

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lindsyjones
Happy how nice of you to visit. Thanks. teddybear
lindsyjones
My dearly loved, BY...how so majestic and so unparalleled, the beauty and spirit these flowers are giving me. How so grateful I am for this. Can't thank you enough. I love you so much my dear friend. angel
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