Ghostwriter

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Nov 2014 2,090 Views 44 comments

Ghostwriter

This haunted temple of mine inside is just a spirit prison...
Housing cold dark spirits that control my every thought...
I have not chosen these frozen and unholy written visions...
And though I'm blessed, I am a mess, and thoroughly possessed...

I would love to choose, the words I've used, to create a new tomorrow...
Ghosts inside have taken over and gotten the best of me...
I've lost control, of my sick soul, there's nothing left to borrow...
I can't compete, I'm incomplete, there's no love left just sorrow...

Exorcisms failed to force from where these demons roam...
Ghostly rebel spirits have now made me their new home...
An abduction of, who I once was, a pure and innocent child...
Ghostwriters in me, are obviously, the one's that wrote this poem....

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Posted: Nov 2014

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Comments (44)

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USANov 3, 2014

This is just so complete in the "ghostwriter" in you and well versed! I really enjoyed this Candy! Excellent work!

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 4, 2014

This is cool Candy. Nice creative poem. And there's an upside to your possession. If all the
exorcisms don't kick in you may be able to publish a whole series of 'other worldly'
poems. Tales from the dark side.

Cafe

calmheartseeksSomewhere, California USANov 5, 2014

Above average, excellent poem. Loved the cadence.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USANov 6, 2014

Thanks you very much Jade for that kind and specific feedback.

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USANov 6, 2014

Cool and mystical write Christian..

Regards,

Ken

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USANov 6, 2014

Thank your Mr. JC2. for that amusing comment. Those spirits do have a way with words dont they.....thank you bro.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USANov 6, 2014

Calmheart, than you for taking the time to read and comment on this, and in addition, thanks for your excellent contributions to the blog pages as well.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 6, 2014

Hi Candy

Everything about this poem rings true in myself...
I can honestly say,I have slowly but surly banished all those negative pesky ghosts

and invited the positive ones to move right on in

Some demons are not so scary when faced with the truth of the problem

A wonderful heartfelt read...thank you for sharing

Martinaxxx

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 7, 2014

Hi Christian, your poem was a pleasure to read. I love the fact that you started with one line of thought and didn't allow your mind to drift off into another world. Which is a sign of a good writer who puts alot of forethought and effort into his work.

Loved especially the third and forth rhyming couplets. I envision your words succinctly as though your emotions were mines. Overall I thoroughly enjoyed your presentation here Christian. It was a pleasure to peruse. Just excellent.
M.M

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 7, 2014

this is really good candykid;
it flows beautifully and is deeply expressive.

nice job!

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 8, 2014

Hi, candykid,
Between I would love to choose, the words i've used, to create a new tomorrow... and Ghosts inside have taken over and gotten the best of me..., I sense a civil war in the making. Thank you, or the Ghostwriter, for sharing this write.