I have a vague recollection of being in the pre-existence... I've persisted with persistence from resistance that resisted... I've insisted my insistence, without any assistance... I can vaguely recall said dark distance...
Persistor existor... Insistor assistor... Resisting the painful resistor...
Persisting existing... Insisting assisting... Resisting your twisting sharp stings...
Enlisting your enlistment, I have made a commitment... I'm smitten with the figment of your pigment... And just like an infant, you are innocently innocent... And are as pure as the stars in the distance....
always great reading from you christian excellent pen dear friend
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 23, 2014
Its a difficult feat to write in this particular way and still make sense of it all. You've managed to do both which is just great. Enjoyed perusing this one Christian.
Oh my I'm getting dizzy So dizzy I now am wheezing Oh no I've started sneezing Brr the temperatures so I'm freezing And my backside is getting breezy!!
Sorry - couldn't resist - great write - thanks for the concentration puzzle!
Comments (14)
Ken
mind for such writing.
Cafe
Very clever, loved the last two lines,
Phil.
So dizzy I now am wheezing
Oh no I've started sneezing
Brr the temperatures so I'm freezing
And my backside is getting breezy!!
Sorry - couldn't resist - great write - thanks for the concentration puzzle!
Kathy