Wordplay Part 2

I have a vague recollection of being in the pre-existence...
I've persisted with persistence from resistance that resisted...
I've insisted my insistence, without any assistance...
I can vaguely recall said dark distance...

Persistor existor...
Insistor assistor...
Resisting the painful resistor...

Persisting existing...
Insisting assisting...
Resisting your twisting sharp stings...

Enlisting your enlistment, I have made a commitment...
I'm smitten with the figment of your pigment...
And just like an infant, you are innocently innocent...
And are as pure as the stars in the distance....
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Posted: Nov 2014

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ImagineLove
You know Candy I love this...word warrior all the way...excellent! hug purple heart
darkhorse555
always great reading from you christian excellent pen dear friendangel grin
Poetnumber1
Its a difficult feat to write in this particular way and still make sense of it all. You've managed to do both which is just great. Enjoyed perusing this one Christian.

cheers
avias
Christian....Congrats for giving us this....good train of thought written with skill.wine handshake
Spartacus2012
Well done Christian!

Kenthumbs up
cafetwo2010
This is injoyable and most entertaning bro. You have a good
mind for such writing.
Cafe
Leony1510
Every line of this is right on the rhythm big respect brotherhandshake handshake
candykid
Thanks Jade....purple heart
bard76
Clever write Christian.......David......
reguiny2006
Hello Candy,
Very clever, loved the last two lines,

Phil.
rusticbink
Clever intertainment , persistently listed.
candykid
Liam....thanks brother....I hope you are keeping well over there in that beautiful country of yours....cheers
godsprincessonline today!
Oh my I'm getting dizzy
So dizzy I now am wheezing
Oh no I've started sneezing
Brr the temperatures so I'm freezing
And my backside is getting breezy!!

Sorry - couldn't resist - great write - thanks for the concentration puzzle! teddybear

Kathy heart wings
candykid
purple heart
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