Mirror mirror

by Abby1963California, USA

Dec 2014 1,041 Views 20 comments

Mirror mirror

Author: Abby1963

Mirror mirror on the wall
Tell me Tell me
will I ever have it all
Mirror mirror on the wall
whose gonna catch me if I fall
I'm taking a leap
For a man I can never keep
Mirror mirror on the wall
I'm in to deep
As I sit here I weap
Thinking of all the love
That can never be
We couldnt even kiss
Mirror mirror on the wall,
I'm so sad and blue
My hearts cracked in two
Mirror mirror on the wall
I know I can't have it all

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Posted: Dec 2014

About this poem:

You know I love you . You know it's true xxxxooos

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Comments (20)

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USADec 17, 2014

Abby, I am feeling this with you my friend! Nicely worded!

bard76Risca, Gwent, Wales UKDec 17, 2014

Beautiful...I can relate, to love someone you carnt hold or kiss...it's painful....but I'd rather that than nothing.....at least you can keep them close in your heart.....nice write Abby.....David.....x

48jojosomewhere, Minnesota USADec 17, 2014

To the person in the mirror I will catch u if you fall
Nice poem

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 17, 2014

Imagine love thank you so much for your lovely comment

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USADec 17, 2014

Don't give up Abby..Thanks for the share!

Ken

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 17, 2014

David thank you for your uplifting comment. Your absolutely right

(A)

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 18, 2014

Joe thank you for your lovely comment (A)

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 18, 2014

Ken thank you and no I won't give up. (A)

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USADec 18, 2014

A relatable piece here. Enjoyed much… Jesse

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 18, 2014

Jessie Ihank you for your kind comment ( A)

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 18, 2014

Girl, you are strong... and your words are too... Really nice write...

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandDec 18, 2014

Hi Abby

I believe the mirror is a beautiful piece of time...
Us woman tuck underneath our armpit always ready for...Anything

Reflection... ( HELLO )

Thank you for sharing

Martina

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 18, 2014

Diana thank you for your lovely comment . I love he and he loves me ! sad but we just can't be.for we live in separate countries .so I will have to love him from afar ! HAVE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 18, 2014

Martina you are wise thank you for your lovely commrent HAVE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS!

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaDec 19, 2014

Abby, if you find a real love, it is more than 'it all'. I wish you all the best.

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 20, 2014

Violet a thank you for your lovely comment . Merry christmas

SemsuSt.Johns, Saint John Antigua and BarbudaDec 20, 2014

Wooow, it's nice, but diin't you still put little to much expectations on your Heart?

Rolf

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USADec 20, 2014

Semi thank you for your comment . Sometimes you don't pick who you fall in love with sometimes it just happens in this case he lives out of the country we video chat and email eachother yes Ilove him and as I wrote in my poem ( I know I can't have it all.) So he and I enjoy what we have . Have a very merry Christmas!!

online today!

godsprincessOwego, New York USAJul 30, 2015

I'm sorry Laura. I didn't know you had a poem entitled Mirror Mirror. I'll have to change the title of my poem. I hadn't seen your lovely poem before I wrote mine. I'm trying to get some of the poets back on top because the one poet is flooding the pages.

Kathy

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAJul 30, 2015

Oh Kathy please don't you dRe change the title of your poem. My feelings would be hurt. Your such a breath of fresh air thank you so much for your lovely comment