Twice the Man

I traveled around the world
A couple of years ago
When I was young and wild
And I needed time to grow

I met a fair young woman,
Whose face was like a song;
But the verses soon grew strained
And the magic quickly gone

Chorus
I know that I am twice the man
My father thought I’d be
I hope that I am half the man
You think that you can see

You seem to think I’m someone strong
And well upon the way
I pray that you’re not too far wrong
And love me anyway


Bridge
All that I know is that I want you
Here with me tonight
I know that this feeling is right
Tell me you love me and
Want me here with you
Say that you’re ready to
Feel a love that is true

I’m not a handsome gentleman
All polished and refined
But you’ll find that I’m a gentle man
With loving on my mind
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
I wrote this a couple of years ago, never quite got it to work as a song.

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Comments (7)

beautifulyou
nice CMerlyn,
very little need happen to have this work as a song
..just a small amount of tweaking

thanks for sharing and welcome rose
CMerlyn
Thanks. I've been having a lot of fun posting my doggerel here.choir
avias
CM...You really have a good way of creating the verses for poems or for songs! Keep sharing!thumbs up wine
CMerlyn
Thanks Avias. I hope to be writing more songs and poetry again.
Happychatty1
Hi this is my first time reading you poem that I enjoyed reading thank you and I can imagine would be a lovely song to sing. I started out writing poems as a child progressed on to writing song lyrics for a while and the occasional poem then back to poetry so I can appreciate both songs and poems others create
I look forward to reading more of yours applause
CMerlyn
Thanks. I have written a handful of songs and poetry, but for now am unable to write more. I really appreciate people that enjoy my work.
godsprincessonline today!
Enjoyed reading it. I played in high school band and I definitely was picking up a rhythm with these words. Great write.

Kathy wave
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