Candy Horse Vs Dark Kid

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Jan 2015 1,123 Views 13 comments

Candy Horse Vs. Dark Kid

Author: Christian and Liam

The center of a star reflects just like a diamond...
Returning a pearl within each silver breath that one treasures...
With faceted panels, I promised I'd never...
Sweep over a deep sea of blue waves unmeasured...

There is a pattern woven inside golden petals that kiss the inside of my heart...
Parts of my heart that I've thus' failed to start...
With soft fingers dancing, you're forever entrancing...
My star that's eternally far...

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Posted: Jan 2015

About this poem:

Liam gets 100 percent credit for this. He is so creative, and contributed most to this short effort. Thank you Liam for this highly enjoyable collaboration.

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Comments (13)

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 13, 2015

cool poem guys. nice job

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJan 14, 2015

christian dear friend smiling a joy thank you and great pleasure writing this with you our pens jelled together very beautifully i love how the title made me smile non stop the candy horse lol and the dark kid ha ha thank you christian for your kindness and sweet words pal

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 14, 2015

Great collaboration you guys. It was a delight to read.

bard76Risca, Gwent, Wales UKJan 14, 2015

Great collaboration........nice one lads.......David.....

Abby1963California, USAJan 14, 2015

Great poem

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoJan 15, 2015

I wondered about the title for two seconds ...then I read.... and read again...... loved it. Fantastic write from two fantastic pens.....

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJan 16, 2015

Nicely done
Rob

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJan 16, 2015

Good job you guys..

Ken

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJan 18, 2015

Beautiful. ....thank you...

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJan 18, 2015

Liam, I was so impressed at your unique ability to infuse words from two completely different styles. I was equally impressed at the rate of speed that which you can consistently edit.....first-class pal.

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanJul 5, 2015

Reading this again.... a truly wonderful collaboration

godsprincessOwego, New York USAJul 5, 2015

Whew! Be still my heart - very eloquent - very beautiful. To have someone write poems to you like that would be the most romantic thing ever. Thank you so much for sharing!