oh whered we go

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Feb 2015 1,006 Views 6 comments

~oh where'd we go~

Title shot's in all our grasp
Was it the best ya could do
I think I failed, perhaps as well as you.

It could'a been different but we see it's not
Did the mass revolt to hold the belief
Not lookin so
Or perhaps, just my dream.

~Bentlee~

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Posted: Feb 2015

About this poem:

Did we go wrong somewhere? Or is this what we wanted to create? You only have the mirror to blame! Plain and simple, it is what it is. In case you wonder what I write about and can't figure it out. Then, perhaps you are part of the new! Here's the answer in case anyone wondered!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ipe6CMvW0Dg

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BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaFeb 10, 2015

I posted in the about section a youtube video link and here as well in case some of you who read my words didn't get it!

Cheers and I hope some of you will actually accept and realize where it's all goin............................

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ipe6CMvW0Dg

Titania48Carlisle, Cumbria, England UKFeb 10, 2015

Oh my word! this video is exceptional and so true, it made me cry for the way us humans treat our beautiful world. Many poor people are happy with very little. Everyone here on CS should read this and watch the video. Thanks for the share.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaFeb 10, 2015

I agree Titania, however most people deny truth and will shed any attribute of it possible, pretty sad really, but that's the carelessness of most folk. Which amounts to reap what you sow.
I still do my little part each and every day as much as possible. Cheers and ty for your words.

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAFeb 12, 2015

Hi Bentlee....thanks for the share...bringing awareness to the present moment where only the truth exists. Living it...day after day.....and realizing what it is....brings about the change. Love catching your words my friend. Take care....

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaFeb 12, 2015

I agree, doing a little part each and every day is what an ordinary person can do - this is the only option left. Good if this little makes any difference, and I am sure it does, cause life goes on no matter what. Speaking generally, it is a matter of good overpowering evil, otherwise nothing could have stopped those crazy men holding power from causing a general destruction. I believe God is in control, otherwise the end would have come long before we were born. It was very thoughtful of you, Bantlee, to share this poem and video with us!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaFeb 12, 2015

Hello Jazz, I like the hat lol, hope you are well, suffering in all that warmth down there lol. Meanwhile as I look out the window it's snowing like crazy here lol. Yes so true, it's so much easier to live in truth, but I guess the path of least resistance prevails as history has always shown and continues to this very day. Ty for your thoughts and as always so good to hear from you my friend. Cheers,

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