Star Light Star Bright

the time is near the time is right apon a shineing star i wish to night, she becomes a reallity of a devine dream from long ago so far but so near, here eyes shineing like diamons in the nights sky baskng in here glow i well never let here go......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2015

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Post Comment

Comments (6)

beautifulyou
this is a lovely write honeybear
.. it's pure and simple.

it's good to see you again
thanks for sharing your poem flower
honeybear3000
thank you dear your like breath of fresh air your a lovey writer i bet your a pro and would be a great teacher banana
Sabastian1st
I don't know, I don't understand some of it. I guess you are just to deep for me. I feel it's kind of mushy and a little needy, sorry.

Please comment on my first poem I need it.

Sabastian.
honeybear3000
its a love poem just use your own imagination I think that's what they do like you poem sounds like your board walking around in the woods aimlessly cold and tired trying to stay warm hope that was helpful yay
MilaAraya
is this one sentence?
actually this is not poetry at all..... sorry
honeybear3000
Well mila maybe you could post a poem so I could get some tips cos if you got somrthing to teach I willing to learn comfort
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate
We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here