Wind In Her Sails

by honeybear3000Buffalo, New York, USA

Mar 2015 905 Views 5 comments

Wind In Her Sails

Gazing in my sights she well appear dress in brilliant white floating on a summer breeze as thin as air here beauty comes from within here eyes give life to the ocean wind now the sun well rise again and new life for them will now began

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Posted: Mar 2015

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beautifulyouNew York, USAMar 20, 2015

'.... from within here eyes give life to the ocean wind ..'

very nice honeybear.
really quite lovely

honeybear3000OPBuffalo, New York USAMar 21, 2015

thank you was part of dream I had the other part not so lovey

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMar 23, 2015

Very interesting. One could make many stories out of this. I do love how the words go together. Almost in a sensual innuendo, and sorry you had a not so good night. yet it did produce this lovely piece

rarecardGreen Point, New South Wales AustraliaMar 23, 2015

that is so lovely, nice roll out of words, thanks for sharing.

Steve

honeybear3000OPBuffalo, New York USAMar 23, 2015

thanks heppygolucky4y ,rarecard for your positive comments if i shell do the same when i can if not means i don't understand it and my philosophy is if you don't have something good to say don't say anything at all but that's just me have a lovey day