Peel t Her

jazzy75

by jazzy75Houston, Texas, USA

Mar 2015 796 Views 10 comments

Peel ‘t HerAuthor: jazzy75
Kiss of wind, skin expose
Rite of passage, flint unblown
Wrap in linen, whisper wish
Eye a smile, power fill dish

Tell our story, wren over been
Radio gunplay, window dot win
Heal it faster, rivet caste rim
Tubs waste iron, collector writ Him

Sliver hard ice, stainless ore holy
All by Virgil, squeeze shades folly
Less than words, forever amore
Full of grace, moon-lit gore.
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Posted: Mar 2015

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Comments (10)

Bentlee

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaMar 22, 2015

lol, good one Jazzy, definitely a thinker is this one. Are you in reference to Virgil and his times.....roman poet by chance????? Cheers.

morgen90210

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 22, 2015

I'm thinking country side cabin living by yourself
nice rustic poem

Happygolucky4u

online today!

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMar 23, 2015

Nicely done. I have always loved how you write

ShakenHeart

ShakenHeartDecatur, Indiana USAMar 23, 2015

Read's more like a spell than a poem lol

Spinoza66

Spinoza66Wexford, IrelandMar 23, 2015

Wow you are a real poet... I'v read alot of your poems and they are amazing and you are able to say so much with so little words :-)

jazzy75

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMar 23, 2015

Bentlee...I just finished reading Dante's Inferno the other day....and couldn't help but find inspiration in it. I may have to continue the reading journey...since I don't want to end in Hell....

...and I'm thinking paradise may offer up it's own unique revelations....

Thanks for your continued support my friend.

jazzy75

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMar 23, 2015

Thanks Morgen....I think a secluded cabin in the woods....would suit me well! Although my imagination may get the best of me....

jazzy75

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMar 23, 2015

Happygolucky4u! Thank you! It's been a while since I've spent some quality time at the corner...but it's always the warm welcome back...and hearing from old friends that make this place home.

I hope to catch up on some reading of both the old and new poets alike.....looks like there are quite a few new folks that I haven't met.

jazzy75

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMar 23, 2015

ShakenHeart .... Is right now the time to mention that I have a black cat....

... I promise not to put a spell on you!

jazzy75

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMar 23, 2015

Thank you Spinoza for taking the time to read some of my work. I find it fascinating reading everyones different styles on the corner...there are some very talented folks here.

I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

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