life

my life began in poverty
new clothes and things were not for me
not for us the things of wealth
you wanna bike build it yourself

life was hard but we went on
we played outside sports and so on
we made good friends and stuck together
no matter what we found some pleasure

I had two parents one good one bad
and thinking back this still makes me sad
but these things moulded me you see
helped make me be the man you see

looking back I came through ok
some friends didn't I`m sorry to say
but life goes on and now I`m freer
and my aches and pains mean I`m still here
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2015
About this poem:
sorry not great but my first ever effort
lot of truth in there

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Happygolucky4u
First effort you say wow You did really good. You kept my attention all the way through! Hope to read more by you wave
danieljosh
thank you that's encouraging
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Titania48
Oh my! This poem could have been written about me, very similar childhoods. It is true to say our childhood can make or break us.
For a first poem this is excellent, I hope to read more from you.

Confessional poetry is a great favourite of mine. cswelcome
danieljosh
thank you been on c/s about twelve months mainly in forums
first time in poetry and my first poem
I just wrote as it came out
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Titania48
One never knows what hidden talents we have, I never wrote a poem in my life till I was 59 conversing
danieljosh
well first at 66 I`m still learning

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Stedan
Daniel J an excellent effort friend, like you I do not think of prose or style I just write what I feel and just let it flow.
Keep at it as am sure your experiences of life can draw upon many a situation in which you may be able to write in words.

drinking wine Next time its your Round... rolling on the floor laughing
48jojo
I thought you did well and I can relate in many ways, I too enjoy to write it fills in the idle time. thumbs up
danieljosh
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honeybear3000
thanks for sharing i bet you have a ton of stories and experienecs hope here them professor applause banana handshake
rapturecapture
Hi daniel


I can relate to your lovely poem...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug teddybear
socrates44online today!
Hi daniel

there sure is a
"lot of truth in there"

Great piece, especially for your first!
danieljosh
your all very kind thank you

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Bludylasky
What a fantastic poem. Going by this, you not only have talent, you have a lot to say.
Take care.
keep writing.
elle.
danieljosh
as my second poem also written in 2015 didn`t seem to fair well i haven`t written one since think i`ll try another soon and see how that goes
southmiami4321online today!
Very felt and sincere poem my friend. Being your first was lovely; surely you will have other inspiring ones too! We all have some poet inside ourselves we just need to express our thoughts and feelings. Good luck at this poetry corner. SMwave
wildberrygirl63
Well done it is a lovely poem .
lookn2share
danieljosh: Don't make it your last!

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