First effort you say You did really good. You kept my attention all the way through! Hope to read more by you
danieljoshOPtelford, West Midlands, England UKMar 26, 2015
thank you that's encouraging
Titania48Carlisle, Cumbria, England UKMar 26, 2015
Oh my! This poem could have been written about me, very similar childhoods. It is true to say our childhood can make or break us. For a first poem this is excellent, I hope to read more from you.
Confessional poetry is a great favourite of mine.
danieljoshOPtelford, West Midlands, England UKMar 26, 2015
thank you been on c/s about twelve months mainly in forums first time in poetry and my first poem I just wrote as it came out
Titania48Carlisle, Cumbria, England UKMar 26, 2015
One never knows what hidden talents we have, I never wrote a poem in my life till I was 59
danieljoshOPtelford, West Midlands, England UKMar 27, 2015
well first at 66 I`m still learning
StedanLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKMar 27, 2015
Daniel J an excellent effort friend, like you I do not think of prose or style I just write what I feel and just let it flow. Keep at it as am sure your experiences of life can draw upon many a situation in which you may be able to write in words.
Very felt and sincere poem my friend. Being your first was lovely; surely you will have other inspiring ones too! We all have some poet inside ourselves we just need to express our thoughts and feelings. Good luck at this poetry corner. SM
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For a first poem this is excellent, I hope to read more from you.
Confessional poetry is a great favourite of mine.
first time in poetry and my first poem
I just wrote as it came out
Keep at it as am sure your experiences of life can draw upon many a situation in which you may be able to write in words.
Next time its your Round...
I can relate to your lovely poem...
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
there sure is a
"lot of truth in there"
Great piece, especially for your first!
Take care.
keep writing.
elle.