Drifting Away

by honeybear3000Buffalo, New York, USA

Apr 2015 1,347 Views 8 comments

Drifting Away.......

wave after wave seasons change an the winters fade into the summer sky's ,where the seagulls fly an there hunger cry's like dreamers from a different time ,where dreams never live or never die drifting away it seem far beyond the wildest dreams ,with your eyes close follow the stars nothing else to say drifting away.......

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Posted: Apr 2015

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baby122tuscloosa, Alabama USAApr 6, 2015

I like it

honeybear3000OPBuffalo, New York USAApr 6, 2015

thanks baby

Willow3939Greer, South Carolina USAApr 9, 2015

Love the imagery.

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAApr 17, 2015

Dig your style bro...

honeybear3000OPBuffalo, New York USAApr 17, 2015

thamks madtat

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAApr 19, 2015

Excellent images..
just a suggestion, you might want to try breaking it into stanzas, making the flow much easier.. just my opinion ;)

SAS

honeybear3000OPBuffalo, New York USAApr 19, 2015

I don't care about form spelling proper stanzas im not a writer just passing the time away you can have it I you want but thanks for your opinion

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socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoApr 20, 2015

I love how you combine the changes in nature, in reference to the seasons, with the flight of seagulls, dreams, and finally with a message to just follow the stars, seeing that there is nothing else to say, and to simply drift away.

Well composed!

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