Black Angel

So engrossed in my book I was
I never heard him coming
Past my eyes a knife did flash
So sudden that it shook me

I must admit I jumped and screamed
Like a girlie I must have sounded
Landed back in my chair so hard
That on the floor I ended

A face so black looked down on me
And a grin with white teeth flashing
“You okay. You no worry,” he said
As a headless snake he showed me

My heart near stopped, he’d saved my life
This snake’s venom most deadly
Over and over I thanked him again
As he just kept on laughing
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
Originally written for a contest about angels

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Comments (6)

godsprincess
Whoa! I DO NOT LIKE SNAKES! If this was a true story - was it poisonous? Thank you very much for the (shudder) quite clear picture you painted with your poem (again shudder!). jaw drop applause wave angel
madtat29
Nice one Steve handshake
Yankee4you
Steve.....real catchy poem.......great job...hope this won the contest? hmmm
steve1223
Thank you godsprincess ... Fortunately it is only a write ... I too hate snakes

bouquet
morgen90210
the first two stanza was different from the next two ...and headless snake not really scary but funny when I visualize it but overall it was entertainingcheers
amfa65
appearances
.........do
deceive...
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