River Of Love

My Heart,This Heart beating beneath my breast, is like a flowing river, a river of love, that flows from me, to quench your thirsty flesh, to smother you with this sweet libation, to rehydrate your sad and lonely soul, to bathe you in it's sweet coolness, refresh your mind and masculine body, all encompassing and flowing down your thirsty throat, till it reaches your heart, where it will form a lake of love, at times it will be a raging rapid ride, with thrills and a high level of excitment, and time's it will be still, deep and all knowing, a connection between us, this flowing river straight from my heart to your's.
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Posted: Mar 2010
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Thought's from my lonely heart

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trurorob
Ok SS1, got my waders on!!
rob
gnj4u
Hi, sweetlyscented1,
I'm sure rob won't be the only one with waders on! I can't image everyone not being swept away by this river winding its way into their hearts, seeking connection.
agoodguy2have
why is your lonely heart so far down there!...good words!
Earlgreytea
OMG, when r u getting on the next plane to Cyprus? Lovely phraseology, loved it!!!
hedistuff
very nice...
boyshchrm6
Nicely worded honest thoughts.TY cool angel thumbs up comfort
sweetlyscented1
Ohh thankyou everyone for your kind comments......blushing
Dagosto
It is overflowing with liquid imagery. It gushes. Quite compelling.
asbendd
Sense of the word and play with the mind in a circular expansion pulls the reader to the bottom of the idea and think an image without details
jazzy75
sweetlyscented - lovely poem full of life...i loved it!bouquet
MovinFWD
It flowed right from your beautiful romantic heartheart beating
Englishman55
That's one river I would love to swim in blushing
Macduff5
A nice extended metaphor. applause
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