The sound of lonelines

These photos of us
Are the smell of the path
Where I will always come back
And never find you there

These voice notes of us
Are the sound of love
We once used to sing
But already forgotten

These tears of mine
Are the witness
That I still love you
No matter what
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2015
About this poem:
Broke up and stuck with looking at those pics of us...

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Abby1963
I'm sorry about your breakup . Your not stuck looking at those pictures .some times memories are better off when there tucked away safely . heart wings bouquet
candleinthewindonline today!
This is beautiful...
rusticbink
Abby's advice is right ,
Lift your head up
For the future is bright,
And that painful door can shut.
Good writing from the heart.
beautifulyou
A powerful poem Sara, in its entirety!
especially

'These tears of mine
Are the witness
That I still love you..'

Thank you for your depth of share teddybear
beautifulmindluv
I've agree with Abby1963 comments.

I don't know much about your pain in love but I would move on if I was you because I can not handle it I guess...

Anyway, it's so meaningful poem!!!
godsprincessonline today!
Loss can be difficult - whether it be a physical death or the death of a relationship. We still grieve. However, then one day you notice the sun starts to shine and the birds sing and you feel you can face the world again. Heartfelt poem - ty for sharing.

Kathy hug
sarasvathy
Dear all, I did not notice all the comments here until now. Thank you for stopping by, reading, and giving comments. I know I have to move on as he is already with someone else now. But sometimes I need to let out what I feel inside...
Leony1510
Beautiful write the best thing to do is move on aww voice notes i remember when a beautiful lady from India used to send me amazing voice notes i am begging to forget herteddybear
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