here goes, since critics became subjects... :) I also write,
and i will try to be constructive and helpful.
I read all the poems listed as recent, shown under your profile picture. Since you are going to be published, you might want to rework on some, being published isn't but the first step. Being acknowledged as a poem, isn't just a publisher's job.
I have too many comments to post even under every poem, but you should know i picked one of the four or five that feel ready or almost, most of the others have promising elements or more...
For more, don't hesitate to contact, if i could, i would have commented in private. Also, be it soon, i don't have much to be here for. Kind regards...

Cleverly done Elle, wrote to you on this one, liked it a lot.
Rob