Carnac

Menhirs here, stand erect like obelisks of fire,
evoking immortality of man's prehistoric desire,
rising proud conveying faith's silent devotion,
in stately awe, everlasting as the ocean,
Thus, amid Carnac's antique landscape's scene,
listened I, to time's long forgotten paean
relate ancient stories, its well spun tale
of captive lyrics, e'er weave woven magical,
lilting soft the voice, its powered store
ply, hypnotic mists that floating soar
in graceful waves to kiss high elysian heaven,
lingering long as twilight's embroidered even'
of star freckled fire erupting sky,
captures sweet the faith by ear and eye,
rising here in all its historic scenery,
nestle the lowland plains of noble Brittany,
time etched, secluded in unfathomable antiquity,
wave vapourous washed by climate changing sea,
yet, still honoured bright, erect and still,
breathes immortal breath's unmolested thrill,
a monument of time in stone unquivering line
through proud radiant centuries, here recline,
'gainst winds, rains, winter's flood e'er rude,
conquer time's harsh odds, stands man's tribute.
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Posted: Oct 2015
About this poem:
Recently, I had Phyllis from America and Tess from Switzerland both contributers to this poetic corner,stay with me, I took them to visit the Carnac Alinement, some 4000 standing stones in lines and circles, believed to be in excess of 4,000 years old, this poem written to remind them of a happy occasion, it will be difficult to relate this poem unless one made a visit in person or via the internet.

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fjamesj9701
Wonderful poetry old friend, I enjoyed the read and a good time it would seem… Cheersbeer …Jesse
candykid
Holy smoke. .....that is so cool that there are at least 2 people here that are genuine enough to put their words into action and actually visit you......consider yourself blessed. ....those 2 that you have mentioned are really cool...
reguiny2006
Hello Jesse, my sincere thanks for reading and your comments, yes I was priviledged to entertain to people from differing cultures, they were overwhelmed by what France had to historically offer?
Phil.beer
reguiny2006
Hello Candykydd, My thanks to you, both Phyllis and Tess were overwhelmed by the historical beauty of France, made the world a better place by entertaining differing cultures.
Phil.wine
JoyCrest
Thanks Phil for this wonderfully written piece as always. You have captured vividly the magical air and beauty of this mystical place. According to a story, Merlin the legendary wizard magician turned the Roman soldiers to stones, so weird that these have remained standing all those thousands of years... It was lovely to stay in your stunning villa with sprawling garden. Phyllis and I will always remember the grand reception and the poetry readings we had with your English friends and will try to get a copy of your book. Please read my latest blog...MONEY AND GOLD. Been writing poetry here but stopped for some years but I love visiting this page. Merci beaucoup!gift
lindsyjonesonline today!
My wonderful, great and amazing friend Phil, t light was not only an honor to meet you and your wonderful friends, but to be with you in your gorgeous chateau, villa or estate as we call here in America is one of the most memorable experience I've had. Tess has traveled almost all of the world and I have traveled half of it, but never had witnessed and experience such a generosity.

Just settled back home and recovering from jet lag and just to thank you.

Don't know how to upload our pictures but try later.
lindsyjonesonline today!
Candy we're as real as you can get and wanted to meet so many members of CS in Europe but next year is already booked.

We're real dear Candy. cheers
reguiny2006
Tess and Phyllis, Thanks for your ongoing kindness, the world's a better place for having met you both.

Phil.
lindsyjonesonline today!
The pleasure is ours Phil. I just received from my jet lag and hoping to jump to normal life after today. Unfortunately 250 baggage were left in Paris and mine is one of them.

Thanks again for your generosity and kindness. Hope to see you in the US soon specially with Pat and Mick.

Take care.

Phyllis
lindsyjonesonline today!
Should have been "recovered".teddybear wine
trurorob
Had to look this up Phil, enjoyed the photos of this unusual place. Like the way you have portrayed here.
Rob
lindsyjonesonline today!
Hello Rob. Being able to personally touch and look at them live is like a religious and spiritual experience. Very mysterious and mind boggling. How they're all aligned and the consistency of its space. A most evident work of someone or people with strength and knowledge that is not of this world.

Thanks Phil for the most memorable and historical experience.
hug
reguiny2006
Hello ROB? Thanks for your comment and more important looking Carnac up, Phyllis and Tess were in awe, and good to have them with me. Phil.wine
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