Lost in The rain Nobody to blame Feeling ashamed You came and then you went I have nothing to give My heart is empty My tear face stained It's full of pain Alone I walk in the rain Searching for something That I'm missing What it is I have no clue My glue is coming undone I feel so lost and alone I want to pick up the phone I know nobody's home Along these streets I roam Looking for a Place of my own Something that I can call home
Sad, but nicely penned. I feel lost quite often in life. Yet at the same time I always feel well grounded. So I take comfort in knowing even if I am lost at least I know where I am at. Wish you the best
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Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAOct 22, 2015
Yeah I know it's a bit sad thanks for your comment Rob .have a nice day
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Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAOct 22, 2015
thanks for the little song your a sweet heart thank you Kathy
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Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAOct 22, 2015
thanks for the little song your a sweet heart thank you Kathy
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Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAOct 23, 2015
Thank you happygolucky I like your new profile picture
It's a sad poem, but a good poem. I appreciated your comment on my poem, thanks for the support. I'm still waiting for that rain to turn into snow and stick!
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Rob
Take Care
Kathy
Tis teardrops in the rain!
Oh! How we too feel the pain!
Oh! Misty water wash away her
loneliness and open-up the warmth
of a loving home!
Well done Abby ~ Touching to say the least!
JimEee
Feelings of loss captured poignantly.
Regards Mick.