She///he is very lucky.
Beautifully written.
thank you.
Mady

I like your poetry but for me personally the italics running to the side in the blue make me feel like the poem is running in a water current so distracts me.I know that could seem like a ridiculous comment but there it is. Its not a criticism, just a feeling.
As to how well written it is. Ill leave that to the experts. I read alot of poetry here and its the poetry that moves my insides that I always reread.An in the moment writing that springs from the heart and soul and vibrates like a finely tuned violin because it hits the high and low notes within me.
For instance in your title I might suggest Feel My love for you. And then play with this poem again.
But Im no expert. Just notice you asking for constructive communication.

I think it is just lovely the way you have written it.

I wouldn't change anything.

Obviously someone you hold dear to your heart...