Very vivid poem of such a day. How nature enlightens us always. Enjoyed the write, thanks for sharing. SM
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 28, 2016
Hi Yankee,
It's been a long time since I was last on this site but I saw your entry and realised that quality will always rise to the top. Pity so many of the old personalities have vanished. A well constructed poem with great atmosphere.
Cheers mate
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 4, 2016
an unusual poem for an unusual event and it's captivating one at that thank you
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMay 5, 2016
Wow Yank.. I haven't seen you for so long! Your nature poems are classic. Cafe
Nice to see some of my old friends.... Thanks as always for your comments. I'm still writing away all the time. A wise old friend once said..."nothing makes a writer more great than writing everyday'.
I love my fellow poets here as they are so supportive and helpful with writing my poems. I have learned a lot since I've been on here. I have been for quite a few years now had poems in our local publication "The Moonlighter" which generates out of my home town of Newark Valley, New York. They also are encouraging to poets as they will take everyone who is local poems and publish them as space allows. It is a thrill to see them in print and circulating through the whole of Tioga County, New York. I do enjoy reading your poems.
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How nature enlightens us always.
Enjoyed the write, thanks for sharing. SM
It's been a long time since I was last on this site but I saw your entry and realised that quality will always rise to the top. Pity so many of the old personalities have vanished. A well constructed poem with great atmosphere.
Cheers mate
and it's captivating one at that
thank you
I haven't seen you for so long! Your nature poems are classic.
Cafe
Kathy