SURRENDER

It was involuntary motions,
Uncontrolled reactions,
Extreme commotion,
Nothing but passion.

Clawing for each new breath,
Unable to maintain,
There was no sense of focus left,
They’d surely gone insane.

Self-control no longer existed,
Between this woman and this man.
For their bodies now were twisted,
And united they will stand.
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Posted: Apr 2016

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I like this
lovecanbereal
Or fall?
paulo195online now!
thumbs up kiss ::banana: not sure if this is my favorite or the taunting
lovecanbereal
Hi, Jane...wine
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