Good bye to you

Abby1963

by Abby1963California, USA

May 2016 1,308 Views 28 comments

Good bye to you

Author: Abby1963

It's just not meant to be
This I can finally see
Your heart will never belong to me
I'm going to just set myself free
I never thought i would flee
I think she really likes thee
We never got a fair chance
I will dance this dance alone
I'm left on my own to roam
Looking for a place I can call my own
It's getting hard to breath
Under this mountain of debris

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2016

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Comments (28)

southmiami4321

southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMay 2, 2016

Nice poem Abby and surely soon you will not be roaming alone.Sometimes we just have to let things go and expect better things. Thanks for sharing. SM

godsprincess

godsprincessOwego, New York USAMay 2, 2016

Kathy

cafetwo2010

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMay 3, 2016

Love these short simple poems. You've
said so much in a few words.
Cafe

ali110

ali110Hamburg, GermanyMay 3, 2016

very good words selection Abby,meaningful and heart touching

lovecanbereal

lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 3, 2016

Keep searching - nice neat poem.

WILDANDREADY

WILDANDREADYMiami, Florida USAMay 3, 2016

LAURABBY; KID; YOU GAVE IT A SHOT! GO ON TO SOMEONE ELSE AND HAVE GREAT TIMES! I NEVER COMMITTED TO ANYONE MYSELF AND I LIKE THAT JUST FINE! YOUR TRUE LOVE HAS PASSED ON BUT ONE DAY; HE WILL BE REUNITED WITH YOU AND THEN YOU WILL SAY; WHY DID I WASTE MY TIME LOOKING FOR SOMEONE ELSE!

TRAVIS

doglover14

doglover14hudson, New York USAMay 3, 2016

Laura.....and so the search continues !

Beautifully written.

You sound as though you're handling it well, and accepting what you must accept...yet still having warm feelings for him.

Keep searching...we never know where the 'RIGHT ONE' is ~ just waiting for us to appear.

Mady

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

South Miami the poem is just that .I wrote it while I was mad .thanks for your kind comment

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

Kathy a misunderstanding with my cow boy I was in the wrong thank you for all of your support

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

Cafte poem was easy to write it's written out of anger . All is well now thank you for your comment

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

Ali thanks for your comment I was a bit mad and jumped to conclusions which he proved me wrong .

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

Lovecanbereal thank you for your comment

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

Travis nice to see you around your were missing in action l

thank you for being a good friend to me

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 3, 2016

Sweet sweet mady thank you for your encouraging words

lindsyjones

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMay 4, 2016

A path to a sound decision clears the dark storms. I am so glad my dear Laura that you are wading through the shroud towards a sunny morn. I know you are strong.

lindsyjones

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMay 4, 2016

Then again I read all your responses and it seems the ups are in the cards..Take care Laura.

mcradloff

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMay 7, 2016

I went to garage sales this weekend and found Tom Jones song Delilah. It ends bad for her. I think if we could just commit to one person and be thankful for them, it would save us so much heartache, but both people have to believe in this.

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 7, 2016

Phyliss I must thank you for being such a good friend to me . I really appreciate you

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 7, 2016

Mirador I couldn't agree with you more thank you for your comment

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Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 7, 2016

Mcradloff sorry about the misspelling of your name I pad has a mind of its own Lol

marikia

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaMay 28, 2016

With this sad realization comes a sigh of relief. Loneliness does not mean for ever, there are chances, a lot of them, Abby, keep writing, don't keep it inside, let it out, think of tomorrow and take exercises, keep in shape.
Life is grand, life is great, life is good
Life is beautiful

Best wishes, dear poetess!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dI2x6VqMY8

JimEee

JimEeeNew Haven, Connecticut USAMay 28, 2016

Abby1963
Laura

I think he got the message to straighten
up and fly right and to be a decent heart
sharing companion!

Glad you cleared the air between you two
and got your problems out & off of your shoulders!

The ups & downs of a relationship
sometimes can be a bumpy road until the bumps
are smoothed out!

Heart rendering write!

Doctor ~ JimEee ~

ali110

ali110Hamburg, GermanyMay 28, 2016

Abby
Your poem sounds as you know all about me and my story ...it is hurting and sad to me

People don't take that much time to be changed

cafetwo2010

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMay 28, 2016

Sorrow is only for a short season dear.
Our spirits like a bird in a cage have
been captured and imprisoned by unforseen
cirumstances. But one day the bars will be
broken, and once again we'll see you soar
and rejoice in the sunshine of your smile..
Cafe

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 28, 2016

Marikia thank you for your words of wisdom they are greatly appreciated . You seem like a kind person it's a please getting to know you. Have a wonderful day

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 28, 2016

JimEee thanks for your lovely comment .unfortunately the relationship didn't work out for us

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 30, 2016

Ali I'm sorry to hear that your feeling the same wayn

hang in there and stay strong

Abby1963

Abby1963OPCalifornia, USAMay 30, 2016

Jim what a beautiful comment ! Thank you so much!

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