I was sure he must have hung the moon The light in his eyes , the way they always seemed to dance.. Whevnever I walked into the room and smiled his way... And oh the way he smiled at me Sometimes it was all that I could do., just to look away.. Because if I had my way.. I thought I would drown in those lumimiscent bedroom eyes.. So clear and the prettiest shade of green.. Prettiest eyes I'd ever seen... And yet somehow I still wonder If it was really all just a dream... Maybe loves not all that it seems.. And I always thought the eyes were a window to the soul Always thought that with just one glance I'd see him and I'd know.. But now I'm wondering.. Now I'm thinking... you're eyes are masquerading a torrent seas of lies.. And I'm drowning now... And I'm being tossed around.. And there is nothing but lies.. When I look into your eyes... Prettiest eyes I've ever seen. Was it real, or a sea of lies.. The devil in disguise.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 6, 2010
Great poem, I really enjoyed it. I can relate to the lies, been there. I understand how you must feel. Take care. Thanks for sharing.
SimpleKindaManMeriden, Connecticut USAJun 7, 2010
Wow, I'm not usually lost for words, but now I am. All I can say is that I know the feeling all too well. We share a moment...and a thought through your words. Thank you for that.
Your poem was sad but held me captive till the end.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJun 8, 2010
Beautifully written but sad<yes at times we are ensnared by outward appearances,scratch the veneer and we get to see what lies beneath.You've been missed.
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its cover QuietStorm. Sometimes
we settle for the glitz.
rob