Two lovers came upon a woody brake And entered there within - their leave to take Across their heads a bow of leafy briar Which interlaced below a bright blue sky.
Nature had there formed a perfect cradle - Cover to young love was thus enabled Bees were buzzing 'midst the loaded flowers Where these lovers spent long drowsy hours.
For spring had burst through shoots and within leaves With gentle mockery season deceives And playing now with fancy on a breeze They kissed and felt delight in trem'bling knees.
Where coarse emotions were - some even base Now love and winged poesy took their place The verse of these two hearts - was subtle - calm And their spirits - were - each other's balm.
So if you ever see young lovers - going Into the forest - or some shady dell Bless them in your heart - and just remember That we were once young lovers there as well.
It is amazing to recall those feelings many of us had when we were young and innocent.
But better and more wonderful yet ~ is to be well into the twilight years, and be lucky enough to meet someone ~ and to be able to feel those feelings once again....even stronger tis time.
Thank you for sharing.
Mady
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 11, 2016
I hope you go well - lcbr
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 11, 2016
Beautiful and romantic! BUT what happens 9 months later? Sorry - just a thought! Retired Public Servant who worked at Social Services and Public Health Nurse Dept. as clerical worker and saw the results of 9 months later. So please take protection with you! Thanks for sharing!
Kathy
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 11, 2016
Yes this is true; although this is an "idealized" version of love, partially for the sake of poetry (I owe a bit to Keats here - although the composition is wholly original). I can see what you mean though. Take care - and thanks for your comment - lcbr.
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It is amazing to recall those feelings many of us had when we were young and innocent.
But better and more wonderful yet ~ is to be well into the twilight years, and be lucky enough to meet someone ~ and to be able to feel those feelings once again....even stronger tis time.
Thank you for sharing.
Mady
Kathy
Virgen love flows, natural emotions. Sometimes with cautions or not first time has to happen. Thanks for sharing. SM