Inspired Folly
There were those moments with you,
When I felt so totally at one,
Relaxed in the universe of your smell,
And touch and taste.
I was inside you,
Your mind, your body, your soul.
Two people could never be closer,
I could read your thoughts.
You seemed to enjoy it too,
But I guess it was the attention you enjoyed,
The fawning,
The spasms of lust,
The knowledge and control,
That you were still a woman,
With femininity,
To be desired.
It was all very ephemeral I knew,
You had notions of a God,
And a doctrine of answers,
And an intransigence of will,
And an ordered pattern,
That could not be interrupted,
Or compromised.
Sooner or later it would reassert itself.
And as much as I pleaded,
And was overwhelmed by emotion,
And wanted to believe...
It was always going to be futile,
For the plaything had lost its shine,
The power of attraction was gone.
There was no point in cajoling,
No point in words,
The uncompromising mistakes of the past,
The entrenched perceptions,
Of self were gathering like storm clouds,
The signs were there,
No point in fighting nature.
I was betrayed and cast adrift,
Perhaps at the right time,
For the water was as shallow as you,
And this was never a proper relationship,
A cat toying with a piece of string,
With a glanced hollow smile.
Farewell my dear,
It was not for the want of trying,
I could not fight your demons,
Or believe in your god.
Although we can imagine flying like a bird,
No matter how hard we flap our arms,
We will always remain grounded,
We can stretch out and touch,
But we walk in our own dust.
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Posted: May 2016
About this poem:
The title is based on Professor Higgins quote in "Pygmalion". "What is life but a series of inspired follies." From my experience...too true.
Comments (12)
you're still
writing quality
work, Rob.
Best,
Ru
written and beautifully expressed it knocked me off my chair. I'm dead serious.
Whenever you show up with one of these
masterpieces it's a true wake up call for
me. Thank you for this.
Cafe
It's been a long time and I so enjoyed your poetry. Hope the fishing is good.
Cheers,
Rob
I can't believe there's a town called Boredom, Ohio.
I'm sure my line that you mentioned is hardly original, but the metaphor seemed to fit. Yes song titles tend to be clichéd so it probably was appropriate.
If you find any song writers using that as their title, make sure you get them to send the royalties to me!
Cheers,
I consider a blessed relationship when both are believers. Sometimes one of the two are not, so one attracts more than the other.
I'm a Christian but do not live in a bubble, have an open mind for discussion and respect for others.
Love is the essence of living for many.
To much of a strong feeling to let it go.
Hope you find your other half soon...oh what you expressed as a folly, I think it was a great experience for you and not foolishness.SM
Rob
Good to see you back and marking this corner with your brand of humour and poetic style. Thanks for the encouraging comments.
Too true, too true. Embark me on a "folly" any day. At least you know you are alive. Cheers mate. (perhaps a Spanish red?)
Nice to make your acquaintance too.