Digital Chemistry
Your words want
a warm, sensitive, caring,
romantic, intelligent woman
not afraid to love
and show that love to you.
Your words seek
someone just like you
who is seeking someone like you
who is seeking someone like me.
Yet, you want a tingle
of eye meeting eye,
of flesh touching flesh,
just the right shape,
textures and scent.
Wolves know.
Doves know.
Even molecules know
that pheromones
are not found in pixels,
in pictures the size of
postage stamps.
Desire is not displayed
in digital dialogues.
You can point and click,
but you cannot download my dreams.
To reach my heart
you do not need a password,
you do not need to log into my life story.
Shall we take a chance in cyberspace,
bridge the electronic void,
whisper secrets over hazelnut cappuccino,
reach out, gently touch each other’s hand,
see if fireworks fly between our fingertips,
sense a spark, a tiny tingle of
chemistry?
by: Susan Hackel
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Posted: May 2016
About this poem:
I was fed up and angry with online dating. With men looking at my photo and telling me they didn't feel "chemistry" and they hadn't even met me yet. This was actually a response to someone, but I decided not to send it. Subsequently it won an award in a local poetry contest. Fast forward many years, I'm still single, and still fed up with online dating.
Comments (7)
I feel badly that your experiences with online dating were not good, but please don't give up.
There is no guarantee ~ be it an 'in person meet' or a'phone meeting' or an 'online experience'.
There are men ( and women) out there that sincerely do want to meet that special someone, and are willing to take the time and effort to get to know about a person before 'the meeting'.
Chemistry for me begins in my head...perhaps this is more common among woment, but I do think that there are men out there that would be most fortunate to be considered for 'a date' with you.
Good luck.
Mady
Rob
As of this day
Immediately after I gave you a respond
U rose to the top of the most viewed
Congratulations your poem very meaningful thought provoking
Don't know why but that has happened to me 6-7 times lately don't know how most viewed gets judged sometimes their poems are someone else's or not good or real short or evil or old years old or hardly any activity or views from way back not current don't get it!
Rachael_0622