Are you online girl? I've waited for so long (And I couldn't sleep in the small hours). I want you girl - and I know right from wrong - To write these words and trust now in their powers. In cyberspace, I hope you read this song And that you received my virtual flowers. To feel the yearning for my poetry's - Caress upon your neck - a summer breeze.
For now dear girl - I write this just for you And send my love out on a virtual tide Could something that we both want now come true? (I hope and wait only for your reply). Girls like you aren't many - indeed are few For seldom can we find true destiny:- I live in hope - and hope to realize That little spark of life now in your eyes.
I send a whitest dove unto to your heart My little message, winged, thither goes For this, to work, we both must play our part (Or find our love quick covered in Winter snows). Now writing as a poet, I must depart - I hope this finds you well - (only she knows) - Perhaps this verse of love returns your grace: - I await your reply in cyberspace.
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJun 10, 2016
Its OK I know this is idealized. Thanks for the comment GP. lcbr
Ronnie779Aberystwyth, Gwynedd, Wales UKJun 10, 2016
I love this poem... we send our messages shooting into the electronic void of cyberspace, like a cybernetic message in a bottle hoping for an answer...the answer we want and yearn for..great piece of writing
I'm a hopeless romantic too but I have a lot of realist in me as well. My favorite stories growing up were Fairy Tales of the princess and prince living happily ever after. Unfortunately, the real world is far different. However, I keep praying that my prince will come! Take care. P.S. I wasn't trying to lecture - just concerned for all my friends in poetry section. I'm very protective of family and friends.
Kathy
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJun 10, 2016
Thanks for all the comments - appreciated - lcbr
doglover14hudson, New York USAJun 11, 2016
I too am a romantic.
I really feel that there is someone out there for us all, and so long as we talk out about our wants and needs ~ someday the right person will hear us.
May the lady of your dreams come into your life very soon.
Mady
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJun 15, 2016
Thanks for your comment DL14 sometimes we become resigned to circumstance, although just as we give it up as being hopeless things go and change on us again, strangely enough giving us new hope!. Thanks for the comment - appreciated - lcbr.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 15, 2016
I liked your words and yes it sounds like the old message in bottle, i hope someone picks it up in cyberspace.
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Kathy
I really feel that there is someone out there for us all, and so long as we talk out about our wants and needs ~ someday the right person will hear us.
May the lady of your dreams come into your life very soon.
Mady
Good poem bro
Beautiful reading for your Online Girl!
Martina xxx