The letter lay alone In a mailbox red with rust Its loneliness apparent By the layers of forgotten dust The envelope tinged yellow As time wished to show its age The corners bent and crinkled As if it tried to escape the cage
But love is not your kingdom When the castle has no moat And passion will never sail When rejection sank the boat So once again his eyes did cast Upon the bleak and yellowed note That lay within the mailbox Seeming to bear a cruel wry gloat
It bore no stamp or postmark That sense of barren to the mind Yet it smelt so slightly scented The sense of an emotional bind He clasped it tightly to his chest In pleading hope of a stirring rush But love will still lie unrequited When devotion is a one way crush
Wow! So nice to come back here, and so quickly read a wonderfully written poem from what I have always considered to be one of the true masters on this site,, Bravo Such a beautiful poem on unrequited love.... Thank-youfor sharing this beautiful poem!
Hand-delivered (and scented) requires both thought and effort. So, under an assumption it was delivered to him, the romantic in me is left wondering if the note could have been an invitation to meet in Paris in June! But, then, it would be more of a tragedy, not unrequited love. Either way, it's poignant in its message and lyrical in its verse...a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
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~Q~S
Rob
Its pure emotion all in one
The time of passage
The pain of lost
I love it and thank you
Hand-delivered (and scented) requires both thought and effort. So, under an assumption it was delivered to him, the romantic in me is left wondering if the note could have been an invitation to meet in Paris in June! But, then, it would be more of a tragedy, not unrequited love. Either way, it's poignant in its message and lyrical in its verse...a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
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