The Note

The letter lay alone
In a mailbox red with rust
Its loneliness apparent
By the layers of forgotten dust
The envelope tinged yellow
As time wished to show its age
The corners bent and crinkled
As if it tried to escape the cage

But love is not your kingdom
When the castle has no moat
And passion will never sail
When rejection sank the boat
So once again his eyes did cast
Upon the bleak and yellowed note
That lay within the mailbox
Seeming to bear a cruel wry gloat

It bore no stamp or postmark
That sense of barren to the mind
Yet it smelt so slightly scented
The sense of an emotional bind
He clasped it tightly to his chest
In pleading hope of a stirring rush
But love will still lie unrequited
When devotion is a one way crush
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2016
About this poem:
Self explanatory, I hope, like the note!

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Comments (55)

QuietStormF
Wow! So nice to come back here, and so quickly read a wonderfully written poem from what I have always considered to be one of the true masters on this site,, Bravocheering Such a beautiful poem on unrequited love.... teddybear Thank-youfor sharing this beautiful poem!hug
trurorob
Very kind, Happychatty, thanks
Rob
QuietStormF
Another lovely poem, heartwrenching but so very well written as usual...

~Q~Scrying teddybear
Yankee4you
crying That's sad!
yaspark
That is.how it goes for the most part, thank you for finding the right words Rob.
trurorob
Thank you Sophie, hope you are well.
Rob
morgen90210
Rob this is excellent stuff
Its pure emotion all in one
The time of passage
The pain of lost
I love it and thank youcheers
salamunaonline today!
one of your best Robert. it is such a shame that you have stopped writing . cheering
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,

Hand-delivered (and scented) requires both thought and effort. So, under an assumption it was delivered to him, the romantic in me is left wondering if the note could have been an invitation to meet in Paris in June! But, then, it would be more of a tragedy, not unrequited love. Either way, it's poignant in its message and lyrical in its verse...a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
trurorob
Cheers QSF, glad you enjoyed, hope you are well.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Chris, I like a bit of sad
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Yanina, glad you enjoyed the read
Rob
godsprincessonline today!
head banger applause teddybear

Kathy
yaspark
Surely enjoyed it Rob, nicely done!handshake
trurorob
Thanks Morgen, hope you are well
Rob
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