I take an idea Elusive thoughts, That I am thinking Try to nail them to the page Tear the sentences asunder Write them down, look and wonder At the emotion That they convey Is that the feeling Are all the words, revealing Just what I had to say Make it longer, Make it shorter Check all the lines are in right order Then post it On a poetry page
I like to write, I guess that is my motivation for writing. My thoughts go on all day about different things. Sometimes I wish I had a pen and paper available so I could write my ideas down before I forget them when I comes time to write another poem.
@ southmiami4321 aww thanks , I make my doggerel about anything that pops in my head but dont publish everything
lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJul 7, 2016
Poetry - as in music - sometimes simplicity is best Elusive beauty plays to well trained ears with gentle caress The subtlety of our souls may cause us pain; - When were no longer here - hopefully our thoughts remain.
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I use my Mobile, (cell to you ), and make notes using that, if I get them when not near my keyboard
aww thanks , I make my doggerel about anything that pops in my head but dont publish everything
Elusive beauty plays to well trained ears with gentle caress
The subtlety of our souls may cause us pain; -
When were no longer here - hopefully our thoughts remain.