When you were born you were never handed The mysterious equations of life..
In your cradle you merely cried for your Mothers milk and the bright shiney toys That dangled above your crib
Your world was nothing more than a Pristine universe filled with playgrounds,
Mud puddles, and swinging off the old tire That swung you into the local pond
The thrill of reeling in that first Catfish, and your freckled faced Sweetheart from the forth grade was your
Souls joy with bull frogs and crickets Making song in your hidden cove
Truth for you was the song of creation Pressing upon your tender mind and as you Covered your head in that warm blanket at Night only the smell of autumn leaves drifted you to sleep
But as the years rolled on bookbags and School buses transported you to an outside World
A world beyond bull frogs and splashing Toes in the pond
A world insensitive to a mothers touch, And to bedtime stories on Christmas eve
The restlessness of the world of people With all it's confusion and doubt
What to you was the the obvious logic Of the love of life was called into reason By minds who saw little or nothing in the Slimplicity of innocence
Few wise men as it were, pay Much heed to the humbling truths From the mouths of babes
The cold calulations of Arrogant teachers would surely Test the veracity of your humble Emotions
The beauty of all your Golden sunsets, the smile Of a freckled faced girl has Been thoughly tested in a solution In your science lab, and your childhood Asumptions have been found wanting
But your heart would not relent The star of your hope still burns Within your soul
Dusty old philosophers books, and Faithless disciples of doom could Never match the wisdom of bull frogs And hidden lakes filled with catfish And the freckled faced smile of that Forth grade sweetheart..
They can never follow your star which is The light of your life. Cafe
Hi Cafe, this is such a wonderful write. Never lose the child in you for then you lose the magic in this world. I actually didn't want this piece to end, i could have just read on no matter how long. You do know how to lay out your stories my friend. Poetry at its best. Have a good day....Mike.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAAug 5, 2016
Mike.. Thank you friend. My computer won't allow me to write pieces much longer than this. But I'm happy you got something out of this one. Cafe
That forth grade sweetheart with freckles touched my heart! Where is he now? What has become of him? "Days and years pass in their usual course, Playfellows and friends I anew recall, See them on the road, wonder where they go, Took for road with them all my dearest hopes." How sad that life is taking us with all our good memories to where it must end one day! This one I read with a regret, though I should have felt otherwise. I would call it a masterpiece - a story of life, of how it evolves. Cafe, you have what makes a man a poet! Many thanks for sharing it with us!
DougwiseNongoma, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 4, 2016
I am touched by ur background and atmosphere used in the poem. keep my star in mind.. thanks bro
DougwiseNongoma, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 4, 2016
I am touched by ur background and atmosphere used in the poem. keep my star in mind.. thanks bro
DougwiseNongoma, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 4, 2016
I am touched by ur background and atmosphere used in the poem. keep my star in mind.. thanks bro
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 4, 2016
Marikia.. I love your poetic quote, " Days and years gone by.." On second reading, I think this is one of those poems which could have been much longer touching many sentiments. You do have a heart for poetry, no doubt it. Your comments always encourage and enlighten me for many years now. I'm always open to your suggestions.. Cafe
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 4, 2016
Marikia.. Oops.. That's ('no doubt about it.)' Cafe
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 4, 2016
Dougwise.. Thank you my friend for your kind compliment. Cafe
Comments (24)
Kathy
Thank you dear. You are so right
Cafe
Thank you my friend.
Cafe
Kathy
Follow your star no matter how hopeless no matter how far!
I loved reading...love the last two lines...Beautiful
Martina xxx
Cafe
Loved your poem
Thank you friend. My computer won't allow
me to write pieces much longer than this.
But I'm happy you got something out of
this one.
Cafe
"Days and years pass in their usual course,
Playfellows and friends I anew recall,
See them on the road, wonder where they go,
Took for road with them all my dearest hopes."
How sad that life is taking us with all our good memories to where it must end one day!
This one I read with a regret, though I should have felt otherwise. I would call it a masterpiece - a story of life, of how it evolves. Cafe, you have what makes a man a poet! Many thanks for sharing it with us!
keep my star in mind..
thanks bro
keep my star in mind..
thanks bro
keep my star in mind..
thanks bro
I love your poetic quote, " Days and years
gone by.." On second reading, I think this
is one of those poems which could have
been much longer touching many sentiments.
You do have a heart for poetry, no doubt
it. Your comments always encourage and
enlighten me for many years now. I'm always open to your suggestions..
Cafe
Oops.. That's ('no doubt about it.)'
Cafe
Thank you my friend for your kind compliment.
Cafe
Thanks bro. Nice to see you again. Your
poetry has always been quite intriguing.
Keep up the good work.
Cafe
We must all follow our own special star ..The stars are a gate way which opens in the eyes of a child..
Living grounds each spark of life,with the abundant lessons of our maturity..
With infinite appreciation Cafe, For your profound creation..
Warmest regards to you .
Thank you kindly dear. You pack a powerful
punch with your poetry seasoned with
grace and eloquence.
Cafe
It brings memories of of our innocence. Thanksfor sharing Jim.