DOES A GOD EXIST

The greatest story book ever claims a god created the Heavens and Earth
the vengeful deity also gave humans what he called 'The Gift' of birth
Nowhere does it say he purposely decided perpetual grief would be our fate
an all knowing surely knew 'Faith and Hope' in him had an expiration date

Humans NEED to feel this life somehow actually has meaning
none of significance is where my realistic thoughts are leaning
People of reason shouldn't believe some fictitious almighty exist
what kind of Loving Merciful God lets innocent suffer and evil persist

This life is symbolic of a very precarious Roller Coaster ride
lurking around every corner is wear potential fears reside
All the ups and downs indicative of how you're often feeling
our so-called 'Gift of Life' was guaranteed to keep us reeling

I couldn't worship anything that in no way depicts perfect or nice
don't question HE who we can't confirm is even real or pay a price
Again I declare I've lost faith but still have as much hope as ANY
something is deserving of faith and in Mother Nature I have plenty
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Posted: Dec 2016
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NOT ONE can say (god) is certain?
Tweaked on 7/8/17

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cafetwo2010
Hi! Thank you for that write. You seemed to have tapped
into some cosmic knowledge that has eluded twentieth
century thought. grin Seems the only options available
to you is that, either you evolved from the apes or you
are the product of some extraterrestrial DNA experiment.
Whichever the case, pleased to meet you. rolling on the floor laughing
Cafe
lookn2share
Try to remember that we have freedom of speech.... at least for now! These poems (words) are peoples feelings, beliefs, etc. If it has been proven definitively that god exist, I obviously missed that somehow and please accept my apologies. I wish people had another explanation other than the (free will) thing. Don't hate... appreciate! Thanks!rolling on the floor laughing doh
godsprincess
If you read the Bible and the Holy Spirit lived in your heart - you would understand the "Free Will" thing. Your heart is not open to the word.

I agree you should have the freedom of speech and you do have that right. However, as Christians we also have that right. We are not showing hatred - only honesty. Chrisitians are not suppose to hate but are disciples for Jesus who loved everyone and commanded us to love one another. You are the one who brought up the word hate.

If you do not want to believe - that is your right - but that won't stop Christians from praying for you as we have the freedom of religion as well.

Kathy
cafetwo2010
Lookn..
Could never hate ya bro. Just messin' with you. Lol. Keep
on writing. Love to hear anything you have to say about
the subject. We all have these kinds of questions from
time to time.
Cafe
grin peace
lookn2share
cafetwo2010 and godsprincess! Thanks again for taking time to comment. To be perfectly honest... I lost faith but have as much hope as any other! I have no problem if someone wants or feels the need to pray for me, it's all good.handshake comfort
Whisperings
Read your poem and liked it because it's real. By real I mean your saying what you think.
godsprincess
teddybear hug
candykid
lookn2share
Whisperings: Your comment is spot on...if not for political correctness we could all say what we mean! I believe it would translate into a much better world. Being forced to keep true feelings bottled up isn't healthy... for many reasons! I don't like fake and will tell it straight, always!

Thanks...cheers teddybear
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