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by elo69santa cruz, California, USA

Dec 2016 637 Views 2 comments

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Author: elo69

shades into shades she weeps
tears which the darkness keeps
til through longest night we sweep
awakening bones of the earth from sleep

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Posted: Dec 2016

Comments (2)

godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 18, 2016

Very sad. Your poems are very short but say a lot in very few words. Wish I had the ability to do that.

Kathy

candykidAshburn, Virginia USADec 23, 2016

I could not have given a better overall assessment of your beautiful poetry better than Kathy just did. I have made comments similar in the past that mirror her feelings. I love your style of writing, and this one reminds me of one that I recently wrote. I will bring it back....