Biting Cold

Biting Cold

It was a freezing night in Alaska, the temperature had
dropped to well below zero, fifteen below with a driving
wind that shrieked and laughed as it sped viciously past
causing lashing snow flakes to fall fast and furiously.

Up in the high mountains the man shook his head
as he stoked up the fire causing the flames to dance
creating shadows on the sod hut's walls. They seemed
to move with a life of their own. Forming first a pattern
a fleeting glimpse of a unicorn or so he thought. He needed
the storm to pass by so he could check out his many traps.

He was working two lines this winter for pine martin with
the odd trap for Lynx and wolverine who were a bane
always robbing his traps of his fur. He also had traps
deep in the river by the beaver's dams, the price of their
fur was sky high this year. He needed to hunt for more
meat too as his freezer was nearly empty and it would
be a long two months before the thaw and he could get
supplies flown in. Turning in he slept well waking to find
the storm was tailing off, quickly he got things ready.

Daylight was a brief five hours this time of year and
one was already gone. He worked the line nearest to
his hut first gathering up the furs and resetting the traps.
It was so tranquil now, the spruces stretched up high
seeming to touch the sky shedding the odd pile of snow
from laden branches that drooped with the weight.

Picking up some deer tracks that were fresh he followed.
Soon spotting some elk high up on the next ridge he
climbed around to get into position. He lined up his
sights on a healthy male and took a clean shot
dropping it in its tracks. Quickly he field dressed it
taking the hide and meat leaving the rest for the
various predators that were already gathering.

At least it was mainly downhill to what he called
home. Striding on as darkness started to fall
he soon was home and now the work began.
He have several furs to skin, stretch and pin
out to dry, others that now needed more
work, scraping carefully he removed and smoothed
the hides and hung them on frames in his smoke room
to colour and cure. Then he had his dogs to feed before
he himself could also eat. It had been a long hard day.

He now had a moment to reflect and gave thanks to
the elk who had died so he and his dogs could eat.
This would be his life for the next few weeks, then he
would take his furs to town to sell. He would be glad to
see his family again it would be nearly five months
since he was last home and over three since he had spoken
to another soul. Yet he would not give up this way of life.

The last thing he did before he flew out was to dismantle
his sod hut and burn the remains on the iced up river
removing all signs that he had been here. Next winter he
would build another in a different place and life would go on.
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
I am very taken by Alaska and the often harsh life there. Pity I am now far too old to live there lol. The
freedom from rules reguarding building and many other things appeal. Like when I lived in Africa only so much colder

This actually an epic but CS does not cover that form

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godsprincessonline today!
Upstate New York State too during the winter can be harsh - during January we have our really deep freeze. Looks like tomorrow we might get our January thaw - though.

Reality of survival in this life at times. Thanks for sharing Shadow.

Kathy teddybear
lovecanbereal
Very evocative write. By contrast, today it will get to 41 or 42 degrees C in my part of Sydney. Of course CS does not cover the epic format as this would not be practical. Enjoyed this very much
shadow1950
ty Kathy not quite the same though I expect you have shops within 10 miles of you and neighbours close by. Nearest neighbour can be over 50 miles for trappers and shops as much as 200 miles +. yes spring seems to be coming early this year. hugs
shadow1950
hi Lovecanbereal ty for enjoying. Well CS is the only site I know that does not have an epic form in fact forms are very limited here which is why I mainly use other sites these days. Blazing heat sounds great Winter is nearly over be glad to see the Spring hugs
lovecanbereal
Shadow1950 the CS site, I would imagine does not have an epic form because it is not practical, and too lengthy, I would say. I would beg to differ, as I think this is a good forum for poetry, as it presents our writing to a wide variety of everyday people, as distinct from just the literati. Well that is my opinion anyway. Hope you are well.
lovecanbereal
Epic implying very lengthy, or do I miss understand you?
godsprincessonline today!
Bringing a few back to the top as got buried today.

Kathyteddybear
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