Lost Love

The sadness in our brown eyes as we danced to our lost song
Neither one of us was wrong
We stayed in our relationship way to long
Too much of our love had died
We forgot to keep an open eye
We had nothing but lost love
We tried to bring the relationship back to life
It couldn't survive
there's nothing left but to say good bye
I will always remember the day we fell in love
Good bye to you my lost dove
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Posted: Jan 2017
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Thinking of an old love

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greetingmyfriend
WOW
Great revival !!!!!!!
We make it work.....

..... our ..........
Neither one of us was wrong
We ...... in our relationship way to
..... our love ....
We ..... keep an open eye
We ha nothing but love
We bring the relationship back to life
It survive......
there's nothing to say good bye
I always remember we in love
Good we stay


smiles
Flame82
Such a sad and yet sweet poem. I hope I never have to feel like this.

Nicely written.

teddybear
Abby1963
Greetingmyfriend thank you for your comment cheers
Abby1963
Flame I hope you never have to experience this kind of love either .He and I were off and on for 5 years.we both didn't protect our love .i now have someone very special to me in my life .i feel blessed to have found love once again .thank you for your comment bouquet
niah9
Bitter sweet write ...with hints of emotions we have all experienced.......Kathyteddybear
godsprincessonline today!
A love that was not meant to be as God had better things in mind for you dear Laura.

Kathy teddybear
WILDANDREADY
good for you laurabby! full speed ahead! travisdancing
bard76
Beautiful....
Abby1963
Noah thank you for your comment .yes we've all felt this way one time or another bouquet
Abby1963
Yes Kathy as you know God brought Skip into my heart several months ago teddybear
Abby1963
Travis this was about a guy I dated off and on .i still have my boyfriend hug
Abby1963
Bard thank you
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