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A sea of emotion.

Wistful sea,of our emotion,
the ebb and flow of sentiment.
Helpless to,the force of nature,
destined where,the wind has sent.

Continuum,relentless motion,
no port of call,in which to rest.
Here flows a tide,of resignation,
o'er undercurrent,of unrest.

No longer floating on the surface,
ride,the wave of discontent.
At last,the strength,to swim regardless,
until the time,all torment spent.

Laugh at all,tempestuous anger,
fear not,the pain,or sadness sink.
Relish all impassioned splendour,
till driven to the very brink.
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
i wrote this for my friend,who laughs in the face of love,for fear of drowning.

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cgedvr
very nice tbg
hedistuff
nice write tom...yeah..kinda like, it's just one big crapshoot anyhoo...
paloma66
"Wistful sea of our emotion",sounds good,I like the poem....Nice one, tomboygirl.































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tomboygirl
Thanks cgedvr.bouquet

You got it hedistuffteddybear

thanks for reading.xxx
tomboygirl
Thanks cgedvr.bouquet

You got it hedistuffteddybear

thanks for reading.xxx
tomboygirl
thanks paloma hun.xx
NeverEndingStory
Nice one. I think a lot of women on here have the same thought as your friend. teddybear
tomboygirl
Funny you should say that neverEStory,male friends,and more than one..

thanks.xx
optimisticme
Nice poem, I like "relish all impassioned splendour", yep, without emotion we might as well be dead, I want to feel everything, soak
it all up,, be alive. good job tomboygirl.
NeverEndingStory
Not me I can't swim confused
Ladybee42online today!
got a lot of nice use of language going tomboy, cool! applause
tomboygirl
I relate NeverEStory,but i really want to feel everything,soak it all up,and be alive as the optimst saysyay
tomboygirl
Thanks ladybee.xxx
i love the combination on syllables that roll off the tongue in classic poetry,something so satisfying in it.
Earlgreytea
"Continuum,relentless motion,
no port of call,in which to rest.
Here flows a tide,of resignation,
o'er undercurrent,of unrest"

this verse 'spoke' to me, very nice and thank you...
agoodguy2have
while verse 2 spoke to Earl, I really liked verse 4. A sea of a write!
tomboygirl
earlgrey and goodguy thanks alot for the feedback,glad you liked itcheering teddybear
jazzy75
tomboygirl - powerful poem...i enjoyed....thanks for sharingcheers
onemesis
So it is kind of Pathetic!

Who is that friend of yours that you dedicate it to?

Is he/she alive?

Is he/she...knows about the poem?
tomboygirl
ahhh..onemesis.
it is for all my cypriot male friends,and myself who try so hard to connect with the opposite sex,without leaving themselves open to any feeling or emotion.
i believe there is no way to halt ones sea of emotion,only a way to prevent the enjoyment of it.
tomboygirl
thankyou jazzy for reading and commentingteddybear
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