Now neglected, the family returned Time to move on, some past burned Memories would linger, never erased Yet these moments in time, act dazed
The heart of the home, had already left Over the years, no more than guests Passing through till today, now it ends For this short time, they'll not defend
Each other- now pressure, joins the mix Emotions are high, and feeling sick They try to push on, but memories halt Pleasures they remember, comfort is sort
Whatever the outcome, it has to be Closure a journey, but whatever they see Jolts from childhood, stirred come alive Aware that in future, only memories survive
Hi This is a very nice poem,,, it highly touch me ,,, Oh ,, I'm a lone away from home ,,, you make me cry ,,,
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAApr 1, 2017
Only memories survive ! Well said, it reminds me of my Grandmother's house, which is now gone, but I remember so many things I saw there. A fancy clock, an over sized marble about 2 inches in diameter - thanks for renewing my younger days. studecar Larry
niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandApr 2, 2017
memories can be so powerful studecar.....thank you for reading, and I am glad it reminded you of something buried deep and powerful....Kathy
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAApr 2, 2017
Kathy, thanks for contacting me on CS email, I tried to contact you but I see I am barred due to your restrictions. No problem, I can read your wonderful poems. You compose in my favorite form of poetry, duplets ! I feel a better rhythm and more lyrical , thus more enjoyable. Keep up the good work. studecar Larry
niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandApr 8, 2017
Studecar........sorry, I can't remember making contact with you on CS, apart from here in poetry....not sure why you are blocked from writing, but sometimes I wouldn't have enough hours in a day....but your comments appreciated as always..... Kathy
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This is a very nice poem,,, it highly touch me ,,,
Oh ,, I'm a lone away from home ,,, you make me cry ,,,
thanks for renewing my younger days. studecar Larry
Kathy