Rough Shot

Riding through
tail winds
whipping my feet

rains no matter
blinding my eyes

hair stinging my back
but
I
rode on

no sense of cold
just
moving forward
Sunrise
beckons

away
a halt
to see

deep sadness
creeping
release

I am not far

stringing streams
winding minds

moving future

caressing past
spitting out

the last
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2017
About this poem:
A journey, well rounded.

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trurorob
Riding free at last my friend, I like it because I could feel it.
rob
sophiasummer
I thank you Rob, you understood.

Sophia
cafetwo2010
Soph..
I don't claim to grasp the import of all you write such as Rob can. I'm only honored by the power of your
being that is graced in your words.
Cafe
kiss
mcradloff
I used to have a cat named Bailey my dad and I found by a trout stream. cats meow bunny
sophiasummer
Hello Cafe
Many don't, it is ok, you are a long time friend, you understand in your own way.

Thank you
God bless

Sophia
sophiasummer
Giddaye Mcradloff

Sorry to read that, must have been a quick sneaky trout.
Maybe heading towards the rapids.
dunno

I remember when you, as many, first applied your mark to this page. (So does..................
Wonderful you are still here.

Sophia
godsprincessonline today!
I'm with Cafe - Sophia. Don't always completely understand some of the poets poems but admire their skill in drafting them and the words. I miss a lot of the old poets and the top notch writing some of them did. I learned a lot from them and hopefully have improved my writing skills somewhat.

Kathy
sophiasummer
How wonderful!

GodPrincess

Lovelly to meet you

For poetry dive deep, come up to gasp, then swim.
Sophia
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