Karma

Confetti bubbles in a heart
while bullets surf a brain
Unspoken deeds rewritten
to hide an act of shame
To Strive and Thrive
within a page of life and love and honor
when trust is sold as promised land
to devil... from a Mother.
When one can see beyond the stench
of death in loves design,
a dying wish...from graveyard shift
will capture greedy minds!
So Shhhh don't tell...
of broken spell
When book of life is driven
A bodies work in all its acts
Is wealth in time and vision
Calmly waiting for the day
Of fate in wheels of mission
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Posted: May 2017

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Comments (23)

trurorob
Good read Martina, the hair also looks great!
Rob
socrates44online today!
Martina

Pretty deep stuff!
Quite frankly, I cannot say I fathom it all,
(perhaps due to my aging brain)
But I get the overall sense of karma,
especially in the last four lines:

Powerful write!!!
TadhgusMaximus
"Camly waiting".......great title for a book! ??
godsprincessonline today!
Martina! It didn't recognize you. Yes very deep poem - pretty over my head though. Lovely to see you - I've missed everyone!

Kathy teddybear
rapturecapture
Thank you all for the feedback and the wonderful comments


Martina xxx heart wings teddybear bouquet
sophiasummer
a good spit to go round.
Great revelries!
Macduff5
Hi.

It's nice to read some poetry. A Irish friend of mine will be back in your vicinity soon. She's not a half bad Bridge player. bouquet
socrates44online today!
Martina

This is the most intriguing piece of writing I have seen on Poetry Corner.

The phrase "When one can see beyond the stench of death in loves design,...."
is unique and exquisite.

I have some interpretations of parts of it which I wanted to forward to you by email
for your feedback. However, I am blocked by your email restrictions from doing so.
Perhaps, you can send me an email, if you wish, so I can send my interpretations.

Have a nice day!
rapturecapture
Hi Sophia

I appreciate your feedback so nice to hear from someone I admire in thought, and word, thank you for your wonderful comment.

Martina xxxhug teddybear heart wings
soulray
Beautiful thoughts
Bentlee
Martina
Too encapsulate, the mind, the body and it's soul in write, you've devoured it here, of course in the way to a reader's delight, powerful words bring upon powerful thought. By ones that can extrude it to a way of realism.



wine hug
rapturecapture
Hi Mac

Always a pleasure to hear from you thank you for the lovely comment, I hope your friend enjoys her stay and holiday

Martina xxxteddybear heart wings bouquet
rapturecapture
Hi socrates44

Thank you so much for your wonderful response I have sent you a PM

Martina xxx
lovecanbereal
Martina, you somehow summed up the great Unity of everything (or a large part of it anyway) high accolades for this...
niah9
Don't you just like the thought and outcome that is Karma........mmmmmm Kathycheering
Redex
Beautiful depth of feeling, captures the circle of life. A wonderful poem a toatal forgivness
rapturecapture
Thank you all so much for the wonderful comments I very much appreciate the feedback

Much love

Martina xxxteddybear hug heart wings
rapturecapture
Hi Mike

Thank you so much for your thoughts, always nice to hear from you teddybear

Martina xxxheart wings bouquet
Ronnie779
I enjoyed the poem very much- very well written and very deep and from your heart and soul...
rapturecapture
Hi Ronnie

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment!teddybear

Martina xxxheart wings
IncubusBaig
Nicely written.. thumbs up but a bit too scattered for a simple brain like mine.. confused smile

So are you still waiting calmly for fate on wheels? dunno
rapturecapture
Hi Incubus teddybear Yes 100/%

Thank you for the lovely comment

Martina xxxhug bouquet
IncubusBaig
You're welcome... pleased to meet you.. Martina.. bouquet
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