Does anyone care

I often wonder in my moments of despair
If I were to die today would anybody truly care
Will they be at my bedside as I slowly slip away
Or will they be off on an adventure many miles away
Will it be quick or will it be slow
Who will be there when I finally go
What hearts will break what lives will shatter
For the loss of someone who doesn't really matter
So when that day inevitably comes for me
I hope those I love will be there for me to see
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Posted: May 2017
About this poem:
I wrote this because I suffer from severe anxiety

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jewelryfreak
yet im so far im sorry u feel so and hope ur love ones around u can see the beautiful soul u are im always here as a friend
Marchmadness03
Together, hold it together which seem like you are already. We all have short coming but some does care more than you know or are able to recognize in your time of despair. You contributions are many, even the precious life you are caressing in your arms. Casting our heave loads unto our spirit world lightens our earthly load if/when we learn to let go or channel our energy elsewhere.
Abby1963online today!
Heartfelt write I was once where you are .i also suffer with anxiety .reach out to your family and friends things will get brighter for you I promise comfort
sophiasummer
Hello
The greatest line?
Was........

"Or will they be off on an adventure many miles away"

You should go there with them
Grab that.


Safe you will be.
You are with people you know, who know you, absolute.
Time to trust.
Free fall

Time on this land limits no one, find a love within you.
Be nice, people like that
Oceanzest
You are part of everything and never were or will be gone.
Trust in the connectedness.
Knhaylah
You are not alone, yes I care, but fight and pray, it may be difficult with this illness, but don't let it beat you
lovecanbereal
All of the above is true, and yet, sometimes the right medication/s can make all of the difference. I would discuss this issue with your Dr, if I were you, take care.
JessicaDallas
Very good poem dude! thumbs up

Kinda reminds me of some suicidal thoughts that go through my mind from time to time.
I feel lonely and I think that If I were to die tomorrow people will say: 'Jessica who...?'
As not many people know me as I am very quiet and shy. Almost a ghost.
What legacy do I leave to the World?
I have no kids,
No book has been written by me.
I only once planted a tree but it died. crying
Dementia
I loved reading this poem. I can definitely relate.handshake
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